This story is a sequel to The Veins Run Deep
The Veins Run Deep | An Old Friend's Return| The Veins Run Deeper | Deceitful Royalty
Sometimes, ponies say to keep friends close, and your enemies closer.
But, what if that enemy is an old friend of yours? For Night Shadow, he's about to find out.
This is a side-story to The Veins Run Deep, not a sequel, however it does take place in between the events of Deep and Deeper. Familiarization to The Veins Run Deep is not required, but suggested. Constructive criticism is greatly appreciated.
Chapters (8)
Yes, finally! The adventure continues! I knew Sharp wouldn't be gone for that long...
Wow. I wonder what happened to Sharpblade. And also if this will happen to Night wing as well. I guess we will see soon enough. Thanks for the sequel great way to start this.
5929494 We shall soon see.
Thanks for the favorite. I'm glad you enjoyed the first story and the start to this one. Unfortunately for the sake of time, I'm keeping this story short to about five or six chapters depending on how many ideas I decide to put into writing.
I wonder who sent the message. This is great. Thanks for the update.
Interesting. I wonder what these criminals want inside the palace. Great chapter. Good luck with the next part. I hope Night recovers quickly. Also maybe he can run into his family that adopted him for a bit.
I was surprised this chapter. You combined Golden Armor and Memoirs of a Guard's Pony into your story. Great job. Good luck with the next the chapter. I enjoyed reading about Night's day off.
6106525 Two of my favorite stories.
I'm glad you liked this chapter. Since this story is going to be about 9 or 10 chapters, I'm doing my best to get chapters out faster so I can have time to work on other stories so I have one less story to worry about.
Great chapter. I liked how this Night stopped Sharp from attacking. I hope that Scar is put away.
Yeah. Great job. I was a bit lost at the beginning with Thunder telling Night he had to be more humble. Great chapter with great action. Good luck with the epilogue.
6182519 I'm glad you liked it.
And I'm glad to have the hardest part of the story done. I literally wrote 60% of it in 3 hours. I'll hopefully have the final chapter out this week or weekend. If not, definitely next week.
Sorry about the wait for the review. I didn't have internet for a bit. Anyway, nice story. I loved how it went into more of Night's new life, and his friendships with Sharp, Thunder, and Luna. Thanks for this small story. I enjoyed it.
This Side Story was Great! Im really happy now that Sharp isn't dead and that they are all friends again
Also, i rate this 11/10 Mustaches
6912036 That's 10 mustaches xD
6919118 Lol, i just noticed that. Fixing it now.
Ah, well.
On the one hoof, you did a much better job plotting this than you did with your first... by which I mean it's more conventional, which I guess isn't necessarily better. On the other hoof, this didn't have as many feels. Even when I wanted them to be there. I didn't really get as much from Sharp Blade as I wanted, in particular; I wanted to know what dying, being resurrected, being hypnotized etc. felt like, but he was just kinda taking everything in stride. I mean I know it's not from his perspective, but I still wanted some hints that this affected him. He seems more afraid of his graduation...
Things I loved: Luna brushing manes, the different villains, Night and Thunder's fight (I mean it felt a little weird/forced but that's almost why I liked it...), the concept, and Night just being adorable.
...I thought there were too many Luna scenes, but that's just me I guess.
7514894 Well, my main goal of this story wasn't necessarily to bring out the feels (aside from Night having to deal with his previously-dead friend now being alive again), and build up the relationship between Night and Luna. For Deeper though, I'm planning to return the feels...eventually.
I appreciate the feedback.
7514968 ...Do you mean that your main goal with this story was to build up Night and Luna's relationship?
...I hope not, because that makes me feel like you tricked me into reading your romance novel by promising something cool...
(I mean, you actually did give me something cool, but...)
7515078 Not romance, they're not in THAT kind of relationship. What I meant was the excessive Luna scenes were meant to build up their friendship a bit more.
I'N READY!!!
Scarwings needs to die. So stuuupid
Nice....... thing... at the end there, words escape me. Maybe i'll copy it~