It has been over two-thousand years since the reign of Discord and the anniversary of the disappearance of the lost princess. Celestia has recently received word from her sister, Princess Luna keeper of the stars, that she has found the location of the lost filly. It turns out that the Princess is in the area of Equestria's princess of friendship, Twilight Sparkle...
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I like it!
Why is it complete? It isn't finished.
6701320 oops! Thanks for pointing that out!
Good start!! Very nice premise and characterization. It gets a bit rushed towards the end there.
I think you meant did ''Featherweight propose?''
Added to mental favourites. Wait a few seconds for me to add it to my actual ones.
6702522 Agreed. I would still love it for her to finish the story.
Woah, Shining/Morning Star has two names!
Not grammatically correct as "I" is a 1st person pronoun and "She" is a 2nd person pronoun.
What do you mean? Are total guards a separate faction of guards or something?
Other than those errors, there's a few places where there's a space where there shouldn't be, E.G. double spaces and spaces between a quotation mark and words.
Good plot, though. Looking forward to see more, but you might want an editor!
hope to read more soon