Dipper and Mabel are twins in a town called Gravity Falls. They're pretty average almost-teens, except for one key difference: they have the key to the Armageddon in their basement. One day their great uncle Ford approaches them, saying that the end of the world is almost upon them. To stop it, he must travel through an inter-dimensional portal to the nightmare realm to stop it. However, when Mabel falls through the portal and Dipper follows as the portal closes behind them, they see just what the nightmare realm looks like. They had imagined what it had looked like: a realm of fire, demons, and death.
What they DIDN'T expect was a land of talking horses.
[Rating may or may not change to T later]
This is not a rip off of "Written in the Stars." It has a similar starting premise, but it's not the same. It will branch off into a completely separate story very quickly. I came up with the idea before the story was published, and the author of said story is aware of that. So please, no flame.
Well. This was awkward, but funny.
I hope you finish, because this is hilarious, random, and most of all, uncannily realistic!
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Thanks! I certainly intend to finish this, I just have a lot of stuff going on so I don't exactly have a schedule. I'll simply update whenever I feel like I'm up to it enough to do a good job.
And what do you mean by realistic? I'd simply like to know so I know my strong suits.
Also to bloat my ego
Liking it so far, but you could try to figure out whether you are writing in past or present tense. You were a little all over the place in that aspect.
6551162 Yeah. I wanted to write in the past tense, but I naturally swing towards the present. I noticed that at one point there was like two hours of writing where I had changed tenses. I tried to go back and fix it, but I guess some still got through.
Great chapter.
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Well, well, well... THIS is certainly a fun turn of events! I'm VERY much looking forward to how this plays out. I suppose I have to wait for now though. Ah, well. The next chapter will come soon enough.
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6578528 You said Great job on this chapter, this story is certainly entertaining to say the least.
Pinkie and Mabel, in Equestria.....reality will know fear.