The Blessed

by RarityEQM

21

Author's Note:

An idea thats been kicking around my head for years now that I finally put down on paper. I did what I could to make it match my vision, but perhaps not quite as close as I'd originally hoped it would be. Still, it's here, and it's real, and I'm not entirely unhappy with this.

Comments

[Ratmandango]

well this definitely ended much happier than i expected

[TheTownCrier]

Thank goodness! Taut story all around.

[kildeez]

Way happier than expected, thankfully! Loved the story all the way, though I kinda miss the air of creepiness it had in the beginning. I like the direction you went, but the creepiness kinda lost something with a concrete explanation.

But all in all, wonderful work!

[Olden Bronie]

This was such an intense and gut-twisting story, building tension from the very beginning to the dramatic ending!

This was a great and terrifying look at what might happen to Pinkie because of her gift of prediction and you wrote it perfectly, Rarity. Well done!

[Mocha Star]

Hm.
It was an okay read.
You've done better, but this is still great in its own right.

You covered a lot of little things other peeps miss, can't think of what rights now, but you're a good writer.

[RarityEQM]

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Well, not every story is going to be a Home Run, as they say, but I AM glad you enjoyed the tale!

[FizzlePopBerryTwist]

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Are you ok tho? You mentioned this happened to you.

[jack the reaper]

damn good story a thumbs up to me

[Starlight Nova]

What's a 3 AM Rarity Short?

[RarityEQM]

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A short written at 3 am by Rarity

[WhispersInTheDark]

Featured in July for Pinkie Pie Stories

[Kit Wolfkat]

That was quite a read, I have to admit.

[BloodLustShade]

Pretty good. I like happy endings.

[overdue]

that was some fantastic suspense