On the plus side of all my research, I'm really into erotic massages now.

7165848 Because it's a real thing and because anger is just one of many feelings that occurs in a relationship, no matter how good that relationship is, so some may end up finding that sex is good way to relieve that anger.

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Suddenly so am I.

~Skeeter The Lurker

That was a really nice ending. Very sweet how Flutters didn't fall for Dash with one kiss, but apparently Dash did. Dash having feelings for Flutters adds a bit more to the story and the actions Dash does throughout. Maybe I am seeing things that aren't there though.

The clop was good, very descriptive, and not dull as many attempts can be. Well done and I am happy to have read through this.

You see Fluttershy, after I was was officially granted the title of princess,

Too many 'was's?

SHe looked at Twilight, who rubbed the back of her head and looked away

“No problem. So how did you to come from Celestia’s visit to...”

delete this 'to'

Fluttershy swallowed, the reality of the situation now dawning on her fin full.

Her weak heart could barely contain itself as it thudded against her breast as they shared their love with the timid girl.

She might be timid but I believe her heart to be one of the strongest.

She could feel the slight ridges on the tongue against her nether lips and the light flick where it taunted the little bud hiding under the pedals.

'petals' or full throttle?

He was a smart bunny despite his temper at times and knew she stayed at Twilight’s place last night afar longer than she planned.

It wasn’t romantic, just a quick show off affection which soon ended.

Great chapter, loved it, now you have 3 more mares to win over.
Barrage of likes I would give to this story.
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I just can't see this type of prompt working with Twilight and Rainbow Dash.

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I've never even contemplated having sexy massages before, so research was in order. Not to corrupt minors (it's not Thursday), but Pornhub has several videos to select from to get it all right and proper. There was something almost mesmerizing with the no dialog and light music.

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I imagine Flutters falling for her in one kiss would be a little dishonest. I imagine their relationship as something platonic, almost sisterly, with how long they've known each other. Dash's romps would undoubtedly change things with Twilight, as they've known each other for less time. But I can't rightly comment on what Dash feels as this story is from Fluttershy's perspective. Can't give away everything, after all.

But I'm glad you liked it. I like scenery and worldbuilding; it's about setting a mood, and setting a mood is critical for erotica. It translates over very well. Always a pleasure to see my work appreciated.

I have no plans on doing it anytime soon, but an idea that planted itself in my brain for a possible sequel still exists. I have thought about Twily and Dash inviting Fluttershy to Canterlot with them in order to visit a dungeon.

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I could swear I fixed that pedal one. Huh. I knew about it.

Yes, Fluttershy is tough when she needs to be, to the point where she can be considered Crouching Moron Hidden Badass.

Fear of being chased out of town for depravity and facing a dragon that could devour entire towns both held the same tenor of fear; at least giant dragons were easy to deal with.

She's a tough girl who had friends that wanted to show her a little love. Nothing wrong with some casual sex. I'm glad you liked it, and may the upvotes be ever in my favor.

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I can!

7561447 This was all the proof I ever needed.
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Research in to wing massages must have been interesting?

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I may or may not know what videos you speak of.

...They may or may not be rather good.

Honestly though, you could give Norm de Plume a run for the money with this.

~Skeeter The Lurker

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Very cute and pleasant ending. I liked this quite a bit and it ended on a very good note. I thought I'd be disappointed at it ending here but surprisingly I'm not, instead it feels good where it is.

Anyway, the descriptions were very well done and made me realize I need to look up a few things myself to make sure I'm writing them properly. Awesome stuff man.

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The ending was tough, second only to the transition from the massage to sexy times. I didn't feel like Fluttershy would be into what they were giving right off the bat. Didn't feel all that honest and more like a cheap plot hook. I was going for a more conservative Fluttershy and her embracing their lifestyle so soon didn't feel like something anyone should do. You have to ease into these things. That's why Twilight was in full friendship mode when she got caught.

I'm glad you liked it. I put a lot of TLC in this one., as I often do in my Christmas Clops (I do one every year). I'm glad I helped out the next generation in some respect, editing or not.

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Very much so. I tried to go more for sensitive rather than erogenous because i mentally can't picture it. Real life winged mammals have hollow bones and wing bones are easy to break. Due to the many points of contact, especially with feathers, however, they're packed with nerves. The general rule of thumb I found for wingplay is have it be foreplay for a pegasus; it can be very appealing, but tough to get off on it.

That's why one of her friends give her wins a lick. Fluttershy not only has zero experience with such things, it was used as both a means to test Fluttershy's receptiveness and get her motor running for the main event.

On a slight tangent, that's why I used Spartypants rather than a safe word. For one, Fluttershy, due to her unfamiliarity, might have some trouble understanding the uses and intricacies that come with it. Just having her hold or put down a toy is a lot easier to wrap her head around. Plus, the BDSM community values creativity. Safe words are a little too common and I wanted to mix it up.

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Makes sense for Flutters anyway. She's not the most verbal pony at any time, so giving her a clear means of communicating consent without requiring her to speak out while in such a new situation is good thinking.

To borrow from this title......I should've stopped reading....but I couldn't.

Twilight was stroking her back gently. Rainbow was busy cleaning off her muzzle. Upon noticing that she had roused, the pegasus knickered and licked her cheek.

I honestly expected it to be Rainbow holding her and Twilight going to town.

Jesus fucking christ that was hot.

I used to know this married couple that would say horrible things to each other. Vicious, bile-filled things. Often in public, in front of their kids even. They swore up and down that it was just how they were and how they showed affection.

This fic makes me wonder... if that's how they acted in public, what the hell do they do behind closed doors!?

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That exact situation was in mind when I made Twilight and Dash's relationship. I honestly wouldn't be surprised if your couple liked to express themselves a little... differently. It's the age of information and open thought now.

Smartypants is female. I really liked this story, and the relationship between Dash and Twilight makes more sense in this context instead of just because they share a book series in common. If a person does not find a constructive way to release stress, bad things can happen. As the Element of Loyalty, Rainbow would be willing to help her friend out in any way she could. If she gets some hot sex out of the deal, that's just a bonus. xD

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i'm sorry, i just couldn't get through this chapter. i got halfway through and almost nodded off.

Leave it to a clopfic to suddenly make me wonder how the utilities in Twilight's castle work. XD Until Fluttershy took a bath, I never considered how they had the plumbing set up. Or anything else! Have to wonder if the Tree of Harmony set that up while growing it. =P I mean, unless they had some contractors install stuff, how else did it get there?

And now I'm thinking about Twilight having heavy water because all the pipes are made of crystal. XD Darn it! What have you done to me?!?