Two mighty races sent to explore the same place at the same time.
what will happen when they meet?
How will they defeat the rising enemy that threatens the Galaxy?
And will they pick up some help along the way?
All things considering i am related to celestia and luna just look at my main all im missing is a pair of wings but don't worry that will happen soon.
Two mighty races sent to explore the same place at the same time.
what will happen when they meet?
How will they defeat the rising enemy that threatens the Galaxy?
And will they pick up some help along the way?
What kind crossover is this?
5918250 Star Wars to star trek
5918355 okay
This isn't possible. Voyager didn't return home until after the events of the Star Trek: Deep Space Nine episode What You Leave Behind. Now you could argue that Sisko came back, but the presence of Commander Data means that this is before the events of Star Trek: Nemesis.
Since when do Federation starships carry scouts? Why didn't they just scan the probe with their sensors? They have a massive suite of scientific instruments at their disposal since both Voyager and Enterprise are deep space explorers.
Why is it that almost none of the bridge crews on the Starfleet ships have names or physical descriptions?
I recommend reviewing proper writing techniques on any number of free sites, because the current formatting is painful to read.
The pacing is horrendous. The events in this chapter should take two to three chapters that are two to three thousand words apiece.
It is inappropriate to delete comments that do not praise your work. Part of the point of comments is to impart criticism so the author can improve. I was nearly trying to inform you that attempting a triple crossover of this nature is liable to backfire.
5920308 Not to be rude but this is my story you make your own the way you want to make it.
but thanks foe the thoughts I will be sure to make some corrections.
Great start pal. I would like to see this develop to be a great read.
Don't feel pressured, so take your time. I know i have plenty.
I'm going to keep an eye on this, but you really need to work at drawing things out. This all happened really fast, and it would have been a lot better if it was slower, and spread out across like two or three chapters. However, I know since this is your first book that you will get much better as it progresses. I hope you the best of luck!
P.S. Never seen a Star Trek Star Wars crossover before. Can't wait to see this get better and better.
6304564 Thanks i have the second chapter done but i need an editor can you help PM me if possible thanks.
This is a Star Wars crossover, right?
well that's not hard for a Stardestroyer, if I remember the newest SW sourcebook correctly, a wing of fighters would outgun the Enterprise.
6431854 Star Wars/A.U. Star Trek/MLP triple.
6436433 good point