• Member Since 24th Dec, 2013
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Downunda Thunda


I'm an Australian brony, who's also an aspiring writer. Other than that, I let my stories do the rest of the talking. Thanks to Corina93 for the avatar art corina93.deviantart.com

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One night, desperate to prove she's not a chicken, Scootaloo accepts a dare from Sweetie Belle and Applebloom to spend one night in Fluttershy's abandoned cottage. the house, which has started to be reclaimed by the Everfree Forest, has more than it's share of mysteries. Was Twilight's invitation to Fluttershy living at the castle the only reason she left her once cosy home, or is there something more sinister still living there?

Either way, Scootaloo will find out tonight.

Scootaloo is also aged up in this, she, and the other crusaders are now young-adults.


This is my first attempt at writing anything sort of horror/thriller genre. I hope it's good, and I hope that you all enjoy it. Depending on the feedback for this story, I may or may not continue it. (Though probably will, as I want to see what happens next.)

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 9 )

Oh. Okay. Creepy. :pinkiehappy:

Decent written horror-oneshot. Well done.

Have my like :scootangel:

5689833
I'm thinking about writing one or two more chapters for this. Maybe make it the entire night. Not 100% sure though... so it might just be a one-shot, or it might be a few chapters long... I just don't know yet.

5689855
In this case - your story will land on my tracklist. :twilightsmile:

This was very good. I hope you continue and finish the story :ajsmug:

5690895

Glad you enjoyed it :raritywink: Every positive comment to it is one little bit closer to me completing the story.

Amazing story! Love it so far! :pinkiehappy:

:scootangel: Who's that !
:moustache: Scootaloo?
:raritystarry: Scootaloo? Spike !
:scootangel: Spike, Rarity?
:raritydespair::moustache: Scootaloo?
:twilightoops: Scootaloo,Spike ,Rarity?
:scootangel: Spike, Twilight, Rarity?

:facehoof:Spike?

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Lol.... Not entirely sure what's going on in that comment, but it's funny.

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