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Downunda Thunda


I'm an Australian brony, who's also an aspiring writer. Other than that, I let my stories do the rest of the talking. Thanks to Corina93 for the avatar art corina93.deviantart.com

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Warning: This story will contain minor spoilers for the movie, Spirit: Stallion of the Cimarron. If you haven't seen it yet, it is advised that you go watch it BEFORE reading this fic. If you have seen it, the go right ahead.


Spirit is a pure-yellow Mustang, who has roamed free on the Cimarron plains for almost all his life, but one day, he finds himself separated from his herd and his mate by more than just distance, but whole dimensions. He has somehow found his way into Equestria, the land we all know and love from the Television Show, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic.
He's taken in by Twilight Sparkle, who has to teach him about her world, while trying to figure how to get Spirit home.

Please keep reading this description for some personal notes. These notes are not directly relevant to the story, and so are not required to be read, but I would appreciate it if you could read them.


I should hopefully be able to keep writing this, as well as my two other stories I have up on this site and my one other story, that I still have in the developmental stages. All stories I put up here, I do fully intend to finish, but please, don't wait around for upload times. I'm an extremely casual writer, and I don't write at too great a speed. All the stories (before this one) had some sort of pre-planning done before being written.

I hope you can enjoy this story :)

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 23 )

Ok this is very interesting. Can't wait for next chapter...oh I hope it comes soon:twilightsmile:

4644700 Thank you. But unfortunately, as I said in the Author's notes, I have no idea how to continue this story.

4645367 Aww man nuts. I will put in my read later then and check every now and then.

Interesting and the fact that the whole story is written in 1st person P.O.V is rather bold and cool. I give it 100/10:pinkiehappy:

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Thanks dude. For the First Person PoV, I just find it easier to write in.

Can't wait to see Celestia's reaction to Spirit.

Please i need more!!!!:flutterrage:

Great story so far.

I NEED MORE!!!

I loved this chapter!!! Please keep going!:pinkiehappy:

Thanks for the positive feedback everyone. I'm now feeling a lot more motivated to keep this story going. But please don't wait for the upload, as I am a very casual writer. But I will try and get a new chapter done asap

Seems Celestia crushes on Spirit.

OOooooooooooooooooooooooooooh:derpyderp2:

~Discord is in trouble

I like this chapter too! Keep it coming.

My favorite childhood movie, plus my favorite tv show... I'm. In. Heaven!!! thankyouthankyouthankyou!!!

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You're very welcome. I just hope I can continue to live up to your expectations with future chapters.

Nice, keep up the good work.

I have the old movie on VHS and I still watch it.

Has anyone seen the Netflix TV series at all?

I shouldn’t think celsestia would turn discord to stone again. Not while fluttershy cares for him. Also if your stuck on what to do, would u like some idea recommendations? Like maybe a race between applejack and rainbow dash? Or have spirit work on the farm??

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Unfortunately, yes. I didn't even make it through the first episode before I turned it off... Your profile picture perfectly summerises my feelings toward that series.


8836079
Those are a couple good suggestions... If I ever decide to pick this story up again (Which I have been considering recently) then I may just use those. Also... I never said she would turn him back to stone... Just that he wouldn't have to pretend to drink tea.

I wonder if this story will continue

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