What started out as what was thought to be a simple common cold, soon escalated onto a scale of which nopony would have suspected. It rooted itself into the brain, changing the pony from the inside out. Those infected could only hope to grip onto whats left of sanity. Those immune could only hope to survive the nightmare it has caused.
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pinkie is to sick to bake she is too sick
really good can't wait to read more
I really like the way this chapter is!
It seems very interesting and I'm intrigued to find out what happens next! Hopefully you'll continue this! 
Best wishes!
OKAY! Does it bother anyone that the picture has 2 of the faces not connected with another (Twilight and Fluttershy) even though there are 6 of them?!? Sorry just had to get that off my chest.
5695696 it's just a place holder picture. It bothers me too.
5693519 I will, and thank you!
5693311 Thank you!
Well, a bit short, but I used to write REALLY short fics on other sites. I like where this is going, but don't have all that much information. There aren't spelling or grammar errors, which is always great, and the detail is good. Everypony's in character, except maybe Pinkie. I'm already intrigued by this, and will be checking up on it. You're a pretty good writer, and your fic is a nice break from school. Good job.
5697814 Well considering I only have my brief explanation of the story and some rough ideas when I make each chapter some are bound to be short. I'm glad you like it, though. As for the details... imagery? Well, later into the story you're going to (hopefully) want those details. And I like consistency, so even details throughout or no details IMO.
(Writing this is a good break from school, too.)
5697865 Gotcha. Looking forward to more!
now the cmc are getting ill
5697903 I have plans
5697915 oooooo
can't wait
Middle-school buddies!Sorry...
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Middle school stereotypesYep it's pretty rare, especially with the association of "teens/tweens" with doing a half-assed job of everything. So quite a lot of people would think that no effort is put into what people in our age group, when (for the most part) thats not true at all.
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Yeah, pretty much.
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5705419 Yep, not all middle schoolers are idiots who type stuff like: i sfadgil u suckkk u havee ze divferent opinon den meee i am mm bestt i amm all knowwing.
All that aside, good chapter, Versity.
5705953 Thanks
and that comment, quite alot of people I know in a nutshell (sadly) 
5705969 Haha, yeah. I know quite a few people like that as well.
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:I
Wow... People these days...
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And welcome to comments about society on a story about society collapsing due to a "Insanity plague". Oh well, if society does collapse it'll either be because a bunch of idiots do something REALLY stupid, or a bunch of non-idiots snap.
5706001 Heh.
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Welp...
hmmm im getting a strong 'the last of us' vibe from this story
+)_(+
ok im confused so did the docter give her a shot to make her sleep and take he back home or what , also don't worry about your writing this is great nd im enjoying it
5707964 thank you, I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm just so worried my pacing is all wonked up.
as for your confusion. Well, I have no answer. Maybe I'm being a jerk, or maybe I myself don't even know.
5706547 if so, that's an odd coincidence. Considering I've never played or watched anyone play that game. I just kinda went ''hey let's make a fan fiction! About what? An insanity plauge!"
5708116 don't worry ill wait and see
5708124 oh i havnt read this yet and to be honest its nothing like the game except for the illness, in this you have it as a disease that causes insanity
in the last of us its a spore, a type of fungus that latches onto the brain and causes the host to become aggressive as all fuck
5708436 yeah, I do know what the game is (roughly) about. But I guess we won't know if it turns out similar till I finish the story.
Did Sweetie just... die?
5720960 No. She blacked out.
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Oh... I'm not sure if that's good or bad or both...
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Now I'm really never playing that game.
Sorry I haven't updated in while! I've been busy with school and the little social life that I have.
Pinkie, don't you dare go Cupcakes on those poor doctors...
I've noticed that Rainbow, Flutters, and AJ haven't gotten sick yet... ThEy'Re NeXt
And does this just affect the ponies? Or will Spike eventually get sick?
oh god, also writer block suuuucks i suffer from it from time to tme and honestly i don't know a universal cure
5802398 some ponies will be immune, and I guess it only effects mammals. Not do sure though...
5802944 yeah it's pretty bad... But oh well
5803203 Okay then.
What's this game that everyone's talking about? And what does it have to do with this story? please tell me, i'm confused.
Wait... is the game "presentable liberty", because it sounds a lot like that game...
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I know it's late so the answer might already be had by this point. But just in case it's not, the game being talked about is The Last of Us from 2013 for the PS3. The story is set 20 years after the collapse of humanity due to an infestation of mutated cordyceps fungus that drives the infected insane, driving them to infect others and spread the fungus further about. You play as a smuggler tasked with delivering the potential cure to a research facility all the way across the united states, often on foot, and trekking through pockets of both the infected, and human survivors who have devolved into serious bastards that'll kill you quicker than the infected, and a lot more willingly.
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6223772 Hello WarfStache.
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6224632 I see... Or rather you don't. From these pictures I can only take that you REALLY don't understand this story.
6224760 not being insane, i don't get why they do the things they do. if i was crazy, it would probably make sense.
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