the kingdoms of Equestria and the deer have long been distant from each other. as twilight has become the princess of friendship the day after her defeat of Tirek the princesses and the rulers of the deer kingdom have come to an agreement to bring their kingdoms together. but is twilight ready to be wed so early in her life? or will she come to realize that she and the young prince of the deer have much more in common than she realizes?
It about time someone write a story featuring Deers. Are you using the Deers that are from the MLP comics?:
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5730799 in a way yes. Personally I haven't read the idw comics but by the look of the pictures of the Deer I'd say my characters are very similar
Is Whitetail, in ANY way, like Bambi?
6180449 he's timid like Bambi and has a slight fear of his father.
6191198 Classic Bambi.
I like the idea, but I still think this is way too fast, and, well, kinda forced.
Like, I expected an entire chapter of Twilight arguing with Celestia about why they decided to drop such a bomb in a letter. That sort of thing is important, especially when it comes to royalty. And come on, this is Celestia. Living 1000+ years and didn't think about how this would affect her once faithful student?
I look forward to the next chapters, but I still think it's rushed.
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Actually this is kinda Spot on for most "Medieval" Arranged Marriages. Often the Wife wouldn't know their Husband until they met. Most betrothed individuals were not often involved sadly. I do agree, it does sound kind of rushed, but it may be a first story for them as well. I hope to see more chapters. I feel the Deer are under used, since they only showed up in the Comics, which are not considered in universe.
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That’s actually how I intended it. It’s a kind of “see if It works out as the story progresses.” Type thing. I intend for the two to learn more about each other and eventually find common ground thus resulting in mutual love.
Wish there was little more ☺️
Could be a fun story 😜
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Thank you! I plan on continuing further I just haven’t had the time or chance to bc of life situations and no access to my desktop. I live in a home with other individuals and I’d rather not bring my computer to this home for fear they’d mess it up as most are lower functioning
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Ohh damn :/
Sorry to hear about your living situation,,
I will be looking forward to reading it if you get the time :)
And do take of yourself :p
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It’s ok thank you for your kindness. As someone with asd and depression and anxiety when it comes to my own work such as this story I tend to be very critical of myself and when I hear negative opinions on stuff I worked hard on it makes it worse. I’m 30 yo and feel my life creatively is going nowhere. Been a brony since 2011 and had loads of ideas for my yt channel and fimfiction and such but now just seems like I wasted a lot of time and energy but I’m glad you are enjoying my work even though I haven’t updated in years.
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Been a Brony since S1
But first learn about this site a couple of years a ago 😅
But I have seen have toxic it can be, so that you dared put your stories out there for people to read I wouldn't call that wasted, but rather a learning experience, and commendable 😁
But you miss 100% of the shots you don't take 😁
And I know the struggles of mental illness, got OCD, adhd, dyslexic, and winter depression, it have not always been easy, and i had a few close calls.
But I have learned to love myself and that was not easy 😊
And while your story might not get updated or finished I still enjoyed it 😁
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Thank you
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You are welcome 😁
And I really do wish you the best of luck with your situation 😁😊
Just read. Seems like a good start.
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Thank you!!