This story is about how Queen Chrysalis takes her revenge on Twilight Sparkle for ruining her plan. Now Twilight has to find a way to stop Chrysalis again before Equestria has to endure the loss of a heart.
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In this fimfic you have to forget season 3 and beyond. So please enjoy and tell your friends!
Why is this so short?
Wow...confusing...but interesting!!!
Short, but sweet! need more
5758288 Aww thanks!!! I am kinda stuck in chapter 3 right now so it will be another week. But thank you!
5760122 Worth the wait!
Hey everyone!!! Thanks for reading I am so happy that I have 4 likes!!!! and zero dislikes!!!!! YAY!!! I seriously think my writing is crap though. So I am extra happy!!!!
Don't ever say your writing is crap, its jus an eternal WIP. I fell into the "my story and is crap boat (it really is I don't know what I was thinking)" and I still can't seem to get up the nerve to fix my crapheap of a story, just keep going and do your best. Your story isn't crap at all, I really enjoyed it and feel it has a lot of potential
Wow sorry for a long comment I just had to say all that
5766907 Thank you!
5766907 Thank you!
5758287 I agree. It was GREAT!!!!!
Awww........... I wanted more on Chrysalis.......... OH WELL! I was great anyway!
This was............ THE BEST!!!!!!! It had a lot of potential and effort!!! Keep doing stuff like this please.
I love it.GIVE ME MORE!!!!!!!!
5822267 Chrisy comes in time..... *smile evilly*
5822294 I will!
5822315 Working on 5 later
Wow! Thats one short chapter.
5852783 Ha...
Oh...My...Cupcakes...... SHE WAS DRINKING POISON!?!?!?!?!?!?!
6006259 Yes, *puts on sunglasses* Yes she was.
A little odd........ but I think its ok.
Whew! I saw this update in my tracking list way back when but I was busy working on my own story (personally I don't think It's that good). I really enjoyed this chapter, It just seems right to me. Anyways, keep going!!! This story has been good the entire way through so far!!!
6421318 I'm so happy you feel that way!!! I'm hoping I can make it good till the end!
I love it, please I begge you to continue it, it's fascinating.
7065870 Aw! Thanks! Not sure if I will though. MLP fanficiton is getting harder and harder for me to write.
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Owwww, okay =.(
Good job in this story anyway.