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Keeper of the Craft


Yes, Kraft cheese is included.

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Rainbow Dash had dreamed of this for weeks. She was finally going to swim with Applejack. Alone. Not a single member of Applejack's family would be in sight. She was given this opportunity once, but she didn't know what to say. What to do. Now, with this opportunity, she was going to take the plunge. A plunge to impress her.

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Comments ( 11 )

Kind of spoiled the ending in the description.

5654911 Just omitted the final half there. Is that better?

Sounds a bit like my story and sorta reminds me of this scene SpeccySY drew for me. Nice pacing and good delivery...

In a sugar coma? Srsly?

I liked this. :heart:

Why can't I favourite this harder?!

Finished reviewing for the Goodfic bin: I'm accepting this story due to it playing off the characters wonderfully.

Details are here.

What an adorable story!

β€œIn a sugar coma.”

Wait, WHAT?!?

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Damn, really sucks that this review is lost to time. Do you still have this HapHazred? By the way, this was my account back in 2015, so... surprise?

11771895 Quite a blast from the past! Not sure what you mean by 'this', though. Still got the account, if that's what you mean.

Nice to revisit the story, too; it's been a long time since 2015 and I remember being rather fond of this one.

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This as in the review you had done for the Goodfic bin. I clicked on the link and it gave me a 404.

EDIT: Nevermind, just found it! Had to just do a simple reverse track of the link and found the page it was on. IT tech support coming in handy lol.

LINK: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/206510/the-goodfic-bin/thread/158291/self-submissions-story-decisions#comment/4220848

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