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CeresBane


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A series of events that will introduce the various factions and their involvement in the events and outcomes of the war. From the forming of each faction to the humble beginnings of great heroes as well as great and dark secrets that work in the background.

In this saga, a herald of the Queen mother has arrived to deliver a message to the royal princesses and to investigate the well-being of Equestria in the last millennia of her absence. However after the changeling incident Canterlot is in a state of high alert and no pony takes kindly to armed vagabonds merely waltzing towards the royal keep.

Disclaimer: this is a War for Equestria group story. Link is found below for more information on the universe and fanon.

http://www.fimfiction.net/index.php?view=group&group=703

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 14 )

Like the story, but some of the diction (choice of words) seems unnecessary and kinda puts me out of the mood.

564160

I know exactly what you mean but my use of archaic words or over description was for a purpose. Like creating a rhythm or let you know the age of the narrator.
*edit
JUST A GENERAL INB4
THE LAST CHAPTERS NOT DETAILED ENOUGH? Get writing then.

To read or not to read, that is the question!

i assume by prelude that theres another story in the same universe for to read after chapter one or should i keep it on read later until its finished

565675

there is prelude- events that show you the back story and origin stories of important changes in characters from the canon MLP to the fanon. for example, unmarked soldier is about the key character "ceres" ending the princesshood of luna and celestia. igniting the debate of who will rise to become the official queen of equestria, the events of which will change their personalities and attitudes, naturally changing the status quo of equestrian politics.

there is prologue-the actual events of the beginning of the war. from the times of it all escalating towards the forming of the new lunar republic, the solar empire and the fall of canterlot. and the early days of the war itself before everypony evolves into relying on the day and night and being weakened by their opposites.

then theres the war for equestria-the modern day events. This is the era I would want for everypony in this group to write about, until I've fully written the canon events of the two previous eras. description of the setting of this is in the related group "War for Equestria"

I've always wanted to try my hand at imagining many different factions in warfare cause... I don't know. Added to my RiL list:derpytongue2:

566296

join the group and go for it.

I still haven't the foggiest how certain factions go to war.

and with the republic and empire I only got the following.

Luna's forces are mostly technological and use indirect conflict because most of her forces were earth ponies that wanted to be free from the tyranny of the ruling higher classes. plus their colour scheme in coats are blues, purples, blacks and browns. things generally seen as "cold" colours.

While celestia's forces are strong in a unicorn population. hence they use alot of magic and plow straight into the battle;

Not pure magic or technology of course. they just have more strength in one or the other.

you know what I'll be creating a thread about this

566250 ya well most people write the regular one first and i don't see war for equestria so i was asking wheres is the original or if your writeing the prelude first
so in other words i know what the words mean but i cant find the orginal but from what you said its going to be a trilogy written by your group sooo my question is invalid now

tricky swordspony :rainbowlaugh:

568264

well I'm not the kind to find the normal thing to be an appealing concept.:trollestia::pinkiecrazy::trixieshiftleft::derpytongue2:

this needs editing. bad

There you have it. The reason the two princesses have nephews and nieces like prince Blueblood and Cadence has now been revealed. It is not because the alicorns themselves had children, but because the queen mother's parents were once mortal ponies.

AND WITH THAT PRELUDE 1 IS OVER!!!!!

lotsa fiction material to play with there. go nuts. I'm gonna start prelude 2 and then! the ever anticipated prologue story.

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