Being a royal guard isn't what's it's cracked up to be.
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This.
genious ending
Loved this, but it doesn't warrant a sequel because that would ruin its splendor
The only thing I found wrong with it was the
GRAMMAR
Oh god the grammar, it burns, BUUUURNS!
If you want, I could fix some obvious mistakes in the grammar, but it might be a waste of time considering it hasn't gained enough popularity to make the front page...shame
Needs a bit of touching up in places:
and also
and one more
You can put y'know if you want...
Don't get me wrong, I liked it and have given a like
Pretty decent, I almost couldn't get the story but it was good enough to entertain me...
*Like*
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the guy was just standing around while he watched the wedding rehearsal.
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You can take yourself and your fanscy grammar to the dungion!
What terrible thoughts one must think just to keep a straight face.
1535089 Don't you use yer fancy mathematics to mudder the issue
The position of the guard is a particularly unfortunate one in fantasy literature - it's mostly to look intimidating and then die fighting either the villain or the hero, depending on who you work for.
There is a group made by me called The Royal Guards where you can show off great stories like this.
Found two smaller mistakes while reading.
"There so many stories.of mares" A little period have sneaked itself in here
"So much.much hate." And here
It needs some proofreading (which I would be happy to do), but it was a good story.