an australian bronie with no time on his hands.
Twilight has found an old scroll in the starswirl the bearded wing of the canterlot library. When she attempts the spell everything goes wrong and something not of this world is pulled threw the portal she created. who knows what will happen now to this odd looking monkey.
yep. its another human in equestra thing. and discord is proberly in there somwhere to.
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this is still the first story i have ever done. feedback would be a help to it. and give it a thumbs up if you like it. ^_^
Dude, one word. EPIC!
562649 cheers.. open office is being a dick about it. it never catches it. it cant even spell teleport. keeps giving me telephone :P haha
562664 Open Offices spell check is worthless. Try using an online spellchecker that's similar to word. Even better, get an editor.
For your 1st story, this awesome
A few grammar problems like not using capital letter's. But apart from that It's all good
562664 my personal preference is google docs its what i use atleast it's got a relatively good spell checker
Its a great story but it does seem a bit rushed. Please continue...
Not bad, Not bad. Please do go on.
/10
I give this story a
chapter 2 is nearly done.
awesome!
yay more
"peak below the belt."
Ba-dum tish.
594342 hey hey hey. quite poking me with your thang..
Is this your 1st fic? If so your doing a great job so far
595292 indeed it is. but i have a couple thumbs down. id really like to know why so i can better myself ^_^
Yo buddy,WoW? Server,name,and faction? D:
595751 Hey no need to beat yourself up man. Your storys great. I have some dislikes on my story as well but i'm not writing for them. I write for those who like it. Don't change a thing unless you want to. Thats my advice.
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im glad you like it.. the only problem i have at the moment is that iv been in the hospital for the past 2 weeks. next chapter should be up in a couple days ^_^
they say they dont eat meat but in the episode with aj and rd running of the leaves pinkie says hot dog eating contest plus there is a ham sandwich in the episode with philomena
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its so confusing
but overall take this you've earned it
I really love this story! I've re-read it several times but I'm going nuts waiting for the next update!
moremoremoremoremoremoremoremore!!!
Center alignment is rather annoying to read. I'd recommend going with a left alignment.
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Yay! new update! For a while there i thought you forgot all about this. Sorry to hear about your health. i hope you get well soon, this is too good of a story to leave unfinished :D
Being nitpicky here but the last paragraph didn't have the P and C in Princess Celestia uppercase, missing a comma in "Twilights" and the T in the second Twilight needs to be uppercase. Also, Emerald Shield I agree with you
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no.. SCREW YOU!! naa just kidding. i just fixed it. dont no know why offices word dident pick it but but it got everything els..
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had not even relised that it had done the. it was only ment to have the title be center. thanks for pointing it out.
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Your picture is awesome.
Personally, I enjoyed them. Slightly rushed and not enough intimacy or dialogue but other than that I thought they were pretty good. meh, oh well. I look forward to seeing what you do with them.