There, past the last star, lies a secret.
Many did not know about Nightmare Moon. Even less knew about Princess Luna. But after her reformation, Luna has found a friend in Twilight, and in a quest to find out more about her, Twilight asks about her experience as Nightmare Moon. Luna responds.
Just something I decided to put together quickly as practice. I hope you like it, and feel free to share your opinions on my writing style!
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Nice story, i really enjoyed reading it, nice work
This was a nice little read. However, I do feel as though it would've been a bit easier to read if there were actual paragraphs and if the letter itself was in italics. But that's just my preference, overall I enjoyed it and I am happy to give this a thumbs up.
P.S. I thought that by adding your story to a couple of folders, it would help garner it some more attention, since this is well and truly and under appreciated fic.
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I'm only starting to delve into story-writing, and, hit by inspiration, I decided to write this short story as practice. I don't think it's all that great, I see many things I could have probably done better, but without scrapping it all, I can't really do much (the story of many stories). 
But it's very nice to see people enjoying this!
Thanks for the positive feedback!
In terms of formatting, well, I hope to get that under my wing too.
I might make the story in italics, actually. Most letters in fanfiction that I read tend to be in italics, and the sole reason why I didn't do this here is because thewholestory is a letter.Yep, the story looks better in italics! Thanks for the suggestion!This feels very out of place, temporally speaking. It's the kind of story that would have been written back in season one, is what I mean. Mainly, the bit about ponies not knowing Luna was Nightmare Moon is just odd. I mean, I can believe Celestia covering it up for Luna's sake, but after Luna Eclipsed, I'm pretty sure there's no question in canon that ponies know who she was.