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The End of the Rainbow

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Gossamer, a teacher at the Cloudsdale Elementary School, brings her class to the Cloudsdale Museum of Flight. Their, her young pegasus student Raven Wings finds the flightsuit of his idol, and brings back memories to several ponies.

A short little oneshot I put together, inspired by the famous comic "Memories" by Capt-Nemo. The image for the story comes from that comic, and link is provided.

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Robert_Tool8164

Robert_Tool8164 #1 · May 7th, 2012 · · ·

what in the bloody hell!!!!, I have tears falling from my eyes!?

jillswift

jillswift #2 · May 7th, 2012 · · ·

I think you mean "ma'am" where you use "mam". (It's a contraction of the word "madam".)
I don't get why Rainbow's being so cagey about who she is. If she's just not wanting to be fan-swarmed, I think she'd simply say "Naw, we've never met." Waxing lyrical like this isn't really in character for her.
HTH

The Pyropath

The Pyropath #3 · May 7th, 2012 · · ·

You were right. The video made me tear up a bit.

Darbihooves

Darbihooves #4 · May 7th, 2012 · · ·

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Well, jillswift, she wasn't exactly lying there as she hadn't ever met the teacher in person before. And the line about "staring at the same rainbow" is a callback to Twilight's letter to Celestia in "Cutie Mark Chronicles."

As for being out of character, it merely comes with age, at least in my opinion. I probably just didn't explain it well enough.

Bell