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Darbihooves


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A series of one-shot stories that are loosely linked together, with each one focusing on the mane six and their parents. With guest appearences by the Apple Family and others, the whole thing ties together at the end, showing that the bonds of family are strong despite misunderstanding, misplaced affection, perceived abandonment, even death.

The stories are as follows all not yet completed (main pony of the story in parentheses).

I. The Eastern Orchard (Applejack)
II. I've Grown Older (Twilight)
III. Bestest, Coolest Pony in the World (Rainbow Dash)
IV. Bent, Not Broken (Fluttershy)
V. Where the Heart Is (Rarity)
VI. A Pony's Place (Pinkie)
VII. Be It Ever So Humble...

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 3 )

Ya know, I find this series of yours woefully underappreciated. The writing style is sophisticated and cuts the point cleanly; the emotion, well, :fluttercry: was more or less my reaction, and the premise of everypony's family is one of my favourites. There's a handful of questions ponies ask that should end with a question mark, instead of the comma you use, but that aside, I couldn't find any errors. And I tried. Let's hope these moustaches, this like, and this fave help with the next installment.

5/5 :moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

I love how you portrayed Twilight's mother there. Though seeing how both her parents and (maybe) Celestia raised her, I'm probably guessing that her parents weren't like Canterlot's aristocrats, especially the way I saw Shining Armor act during the Wedding two part episode helps me believe this more.

I mean I'm not going against how Twilight Velvet was portrayed in this case. It is your fanfiction after all.

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