• Member Since 24th Feb, 2013
  • offline last seen Aug 6th, 2021

Queen Fangirl


Most, if not all of my fanfics are somewhat good to somewhat bad one-shot stories. The editing is limited to none. I'm open for any constructive criticism, so don't be shy if you find a flaw.

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Curiosity. Determination. Yearning. Those three things could save her from ending life in tragedy. She can't stay inside anymore, the light is calling for her.

This is her last chance.

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Comments ( 2 )

We personally liked the story. There were only a couple very minor things we caught.

She will escape from the house by going through her only getaway.

She will escape from the house by going through her only gateway.
(Honestly getaway might work here too.) This is very nit picky

Perhaps...perhaps it is impossible to accomplish such feat . . .

Perhaps...perhaps it is impossible to accomplish such a feat . . .

Ya did good. Had the feels cranked up to 11 on this.:fluttercry:

5630423 Thank you for catching this! I'm glad you liked it! :twilightsmile:

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