Equestria is dying.
Nightmare Moon has been fighting in vain to try and preserve what little remains of the kingdom that she helped create.
She knows that it's a losing battle, but still she fights on.
Ironically enough, it was her own jealousy of Celestia that tore Equestria apart in the first place. Battle weary and mentally drained, she silently reflects on her past mistakes.
An audio reading by fellow Fimfiction user TheDizzyDan can be found here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wnfztrsK0aY&feature=youtu.be
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Not a bad what if story. As far as flow and grammar you get an A bud.
We liked the wheeling and Dealing Nightmare Moon has to go through to keep her kingdom afloat. nice touch.
Overall ya did good.
You should write more. It's always a treat.
So, 3 likes and 1 dislike with only 40 views so far.
I deem this story a failure.
Time to purge the memory of ever writing this.
5619838 Thanks for reading J. The thing is, I don't really get motivated to write much. And when I do it's nothing compared to when I discovered that fanfiction was an actual thing. I might get a sudden urge for a little bit, but then it'll be gone in a couple hours. I'm surprised I was actually able to get myself to finish this.
5619800 Thanks for reading and for the compliment. This was actually supposed to be a comedy at first. Funny how plans can change.
5620543 8 and 1 with 77. Looking up.
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Indeed. 9 and 1 with 95 now.
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Be proud of your creation. It was a joy to read.
Good job! Added to Triumphant Villains and Defeated Heroes.
Well done. A unique alternate universe idea. Adding it to Royal Sisters.
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Are you mad this story is a stroke of Genius and tragedy because of nightmare Moon's jealousy she is now forced to watch Equestria rot from the inside to the outside the story's moral is about jealousy and the pain it brings
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I wrote this story during a time period where all I cared about were how many views and how many likes my stories got.
But that was then.
Now I don't really care.
If I write something and someone else enjoys it, good.
If it goes unnoticed, that's fine too.
Safe.