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Blitz Habanera Tuscania


Admin of the Prototype group and wants to be known as that one guy who writes the Prototype stuffs.

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Sergio was your average gamer. Had a decent life, a decent-paying job, decent family, decent friends. Not much to complain about, but not much to compliment either, well one day he stumbles across a contest. One about making a superhero, from some obscure website that he's never heard of, so when he's told there's a prize just for making a decent superhero for some unimaginative guy making comics of course he'd say yes. 'Cause let's face it, who wouldn't want their OC in a comic for free and get a prize for it?

Just one problem... the powers his character got stuck with suck so much. Though he turned down the offer to re-roll his powers, knowing with his luck he'd just get even worse ones.




Oh and on a unrelated note a demonic hand is popping out of his computer screen.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 25 )

hmmmm this seems cool.....MORE PLEASE XD

My mind when he called himself the God of wheels: pppfffffttt.... HAHAHAHAHA ...
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BLASPHEMY!!! ALL HAIL OUR LORD AND MASTER SQUARE-CHAN!!!!!:flutterrage::flutterrage:

11/10 would laugh again.

This reminds me of some Marvel comic I read awhile ago, just in the personality of the main character.

That is all.

This is so fucking underrated.

Love it dude keep em coming.

5621978 Awww danke, I aim to please. May I ask what ya liked about it?

5621999 The comedy aspect of it was pretty great. God of wheels, just a total disregard for sane conversation, or his piss poor explanations are my favorite kind of comedy. I know his personality should refine itself when he realizes he isn't dreaming. So if you write that part well I'll def keep reading.

Oh I do have a question. Are the ponies more tech advance or something cause you said skyscraper, and that makes me think New York type buildings? I guess you could say they're in Manehatten though.

5622132 Yeah when I was writing that I forgot how that city looked like when Applejack ran away.

Why is this so good. This has no right to be as brilliant as it is. And oh god I can't wait until he gets metal wheels with razor edges.
Also.

the power to manipulate wheel size, density, shape

oh look, Sword shaped wheels.

My face! It tingles from the sheer awesomeness of this!

I think there is a lot of narrative potential in a lactokinesis user in Equestria.

5660569 anything with lactose in it. Cheese, butter, cream, milk, all that good stuff.

Want to join in verse...
MUST RESIST

5973725 So I should just do it like the other guy? Roll my powers and say it is set in your verse with the same entrance?

But I would still want to do some things with the princesses and my guy...

I will roll one champ for every Tier but Ex and take the funniest one. That sounds good, right?
EDIT: Screw it, I take one Tier 4.

5973770 Slow'er down bra. Head over to the Wheel-God verse which I'll link you in a minute and I'll talk it over with Trondason. We are putting some limits on what's what.

You can't say screw science!

Screw science. *begins doing scientifically impossible things*

6094770 Are you related to pinkie pie? I seems like you are.

Please tell me that this story isn't dead?...:fluttercry:

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