When the Crusaders are stuck with the least people they'd want to be with, they're sure they'll go insane in the snowstorm. But the results of an unplanned sleepover surprise them.
In the beginning there was ruin and stagnation. The world was dying; its great civilizations brought low by forces of nature and their own creation. Only three beings of great power remained
Meh, I actually wrote the first part of this story about a month ago then came back and finished it off so I can actually see that the first part is much better then the rest... though the way the story ends is pretty much how I wanted it. I wrote this story just to be stupid as hell and when I came back to finish it I just descended into writing madness... lovely, lovely madness.
...I was going to let this be a one-shot but... now that you've said that the story-creation zone of my brain just started to churn out ideas. Damn you FortherpublicTwoTwo!
It was really good magic weed I guess. Also are you arguing on how said illicit plant would effect magical talking pony foal? Also also I really don't care that much.
Oh no, you misunderstand. I do care about this story! I just don't care about the nuances of the science of consumption of drugs and the effect they have on the level of high. Seriously... I wrote this story for funzies and I just don't care if the depiction of the consumption/effect of the plant is incorrect. (There's a reason there is a random tag on this story) And really what they're saying isn't really criticisms and just pointing out my scientific inaccuracies which at the time of me writing it I knew were probably off anyway. If they were actually criticizing me on my work I would have responded in a much different way (depending on the type of criticism being given)
I can't really agree with neglecting research, just because I don't care about that aspect of the story. It's no different than if I were to neglect grammar, and then say to a reader that it wasn't meant to be serious, and that I felt that other aspects of the story were more important. I may feel that way, but it's not going to fly with my readers.
I'm getting to where I'm criticizing your views on responding to criticism, rather than the actual story, so this is where I'm going to have to just respectfully agree to disagree.
It's important to keep your facts straight when dealing with these things. Otherwise, idiots can get hurt. Now, I'm fine with idiots bringing things on themselves, but I felt an odd pang of social... whats that 'r' word people keep talking about?
THC is heat activated. If you've eaten it, then you've had pot that's been processed with butter and baked into something. If you just ate the herb, then congratulations. You discovered the placebo effect.
It felt like she had just inhaled a bunch of random weeds from the lawn that were lit on fire for some odd rea- oh wait, that’s exactly what happened.
Uh... Ok then....
... Dafuq?
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Well I succeed in what I set out to do.
Your confusion gives me strength!
5614715 Sounds good to me!
The segment before Silver Spoon's introduction got me more than everything after that.
Take a thumb, but I'm afraid that's all I can give.
Just one error I noticed. Cheep should be cheap.
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Meh, I actually wrote the first part of this story about a month ago then came back and finished it off so I can actually see that the first part is much better then the rest... though the way the story ends is pretty much how I wanted it.
I wrote this story just to be stupid as hell and when I came back to finish it I just descended into writing madness... lovely, lovely madness.
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I demand another story regarding this. Like you could turn it into a series. So like "Rainbow gets high. Pinkie gets high (Must read) Ect
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Pinkie Pie getting high? ARE YOU INSANE!?
...I was going to let this be a one-shot but... now that you've said that the story-creation zone of my brain just started to churn out ideas. Damn you FortherpublicTwoTwo!
I'm sorry to say that I just couldn't get into this. What a shame too it had an amusing premise.
Oh hell yes.
*Puts story in folder to read later even though it says I won't but I promise I will*
I have been waiting so long for this fic
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Well now I'm worried I'm going to disappoint you with this story... Hope you enjoy!
1st paragraph... not bad. 2nd paragraph... still not bad.
3rd paragraph... BWA-HAA-HAA-HAAA!!!
5614875 Pinkie pie getting high = a Unbelievable fourth wall break XD
Dear lord, this is hilarious
Especially the ending
This needs a "Gets high" series.
EVERYPONY NEEDS SOME WEED! GIVE THEM ALL WEED!!
5615338 Wow, advertising your story on someone else's? That's fucking low.
Ha! This story was ridiculous. Loved every word of it awesome job. Keep it up!
They seem like they're on LSD, rather than marijuana. You also wouldn't get very high just eating it straight out of the bag.
you don't get that high from eating it
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Indeed. The THC is released/activated by temperature. Eating it is wasting good weed, unless you make weed butter.
For all your brownie needs, hooyah!
5615346 what a grand idea!
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It was really good magic weed I guess.
Also are you arguing on how said illicit plant would effect magical talking pony foal?
Also also I really don't care that much.
Just noticed that I forgot to mark this as complete... oops.
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I don't write stories that I don't care about much, and I sure as hell don't market them. That's never a good response to criticism.
I at least thought it was funny that Diamond Tiara was trying to smoke dandelions.
You're supposed to smoke it, not eat it... But anyways!
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Oh no, you misunderstand.
I do care about this story! I just don't care about the nuances of the science of consumption of drugs and the effect they have on the level of high. Seriously... I wrote this story for funzies and I just don't care if the depiction of the consumption/effect of the plant is incorrect. (There's a reason there is a random tag on this story) And really what they're saying isn't really criticisms and just pointing out my scientific inaccuracies which at the time of me writing it I knew were probably off anyway.
If they were actually criticizing me on my work I would have responded in a much different way (depending on the type of criticism being given)
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I can't really agree with neglecting research, just because I don't care about that aspect of the story. It's no different than if I were to neglect grammar, and then say to a reader that it wasn't meant to be serious, and that I felt that other aspects of the story were more important. I may feel that way, but it's not going to fly with my readers.
I'm getting to where I'm criticizing your views on responding to criticism, rather than the actual story, so this is where I'm going to have to just respectfully agree to disagree.
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It's important to keep your facts straight when dealing with these things. Otherwise, idiots can get hurt. Now, I'm fine with idiots bringing things on themselves, but I felt an odd pang of social... whats that 'r' word people keep talking about?
Also, it's completely licit where I live.
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Ricotta? Revolution? Reverence? Revenge? Racoon? ...umm... Responsibility?
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Well fuck, I concede. My apologies.
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Well, if one's going to criticize a story for a lack of research, they better damn well have their facts straight.
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Well at the very least I'm not as wrong as people thought I was. So there's that~
Though I do hope you enjoined the story despite the inaccuracies in the depiction on how weed works.
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THC is heat activated. If you've eaten it, then you've had pot that's been processed with butter and baked into something. If you just ate the herb, then congratulations. You discovered the placebo effect.
Just... what?
My mouth just opened and closed like, like, twelve times.
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Darn! I was aiming for thirteen.
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Nice work, Monkey Thing
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