Aloe and Lotus are interviewed by a local news pony looking to see what the patrons' everyday life is like. Despite working in a spa, they face some pretty uncomfortable stuff.
Tribute to Epic Wub Time
Proofread by my man, Bootsy
Chapters (1)
- Member Since 18th Jun, 2014
- offline last seen Dec 22nd, 2017
Phoenix Frost
I have a rather personal connection to FiM, provided it gradually turning me into a less awful person but mostly reviving my ability to write. Sunset Shimmer is best pony and that decision is final.
Phoenix Frost
Joined 18th Jun, 2014 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- CategoricalGrant · 3.3k words · 213 1 · 5.4k views
- Thornwing · 1.1k words · 64 0 · 1.5k views
- The Iguana Man · 15k words · 139 1 · 1.4k views
- Ardashir · 19k words · 98 1 · 3.1k views
- MerlosTheMad · 26k words · 1,823 34 · 21k views
- CAPTAIN YOSHI HD · 3.3k words · 20 0 · 1.8k views
- River Road · 2.5k words · 67 2 · 1.7k views
- Starscribe · 8.2k words · 419 8 · 7.5k views
Featured In10
Slice of Life8,179 stories ·1,465 members
Comedy4,749 stories ·1,293 members
Lotus & Aloe84 stories ·371 members
The Rated Everyone Stories Group3,640 stories ·286 members
Spa Ponies93 stories ·300 members
Comedy, Inc.2,141 stories ·389 members
The Sympathy for Background Ponies Society999 stories ·397 members
Cadence's Library10,531 stories ·1,378 members
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.12 seconds
Total duration
1,040 users online
2,179,460 hits today, 2,724,632 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I bet a lot of strange things happen in that spa, this is Ponyville after all. Discord and Chryssi have to be the tip of the Iceberg!
5603909 I don't think the weirdness is limited to Ponyville. It's just all of Equestria that's bizarre.
5603915 There are places in the world that just attract wierdness and idiocy, Ponyville is one of those places.
5603915 I'm calling this now, for if it happens:
This story will be featured.
And it's *perform*, not 'preform'
5603985 Thanks for the support
5603995 Ok, I'll fix it. My proofreader failed to notice. And I see I'm not the only one who likes posting videos that match the comment.
5604007
Grammar Slam is so useful. It's learning while being yelled at.
5604031 And that's why it's the best form of learning. Unless it's Thug Notes
Very nice story keep it up :)
5604159 Holy piss! Your profile picture is lovely, where did you get it?
I went to google and typed down Rainbow Dash in the image you should have no problem looking for it
5604007
Whoops, sorry about that. I'mma blame it on the fact that I'd been awake for around 30 hours at the time of reading.
5605721 sarcasm, Boots, sarcasm. Granted I sound pretty sincere because the internet is not good at conveying my emotions and there was no better emoticon to use. I guess I could have said "he failed me," or something. And why are you staying up that long? You can take a nap once in a while, man. I don't think FimFiction is worth sleep deprivation.
5606085
The thing is that I did fail to notice, though. It's something I should've caught. I don't wanna crowd the comments section, so I'll simply say that I've been rearranging my sleep schedule recently, hence the odd hours and lack of sleep.
This was a nice read. I'm eager to see more.
5607145 Sorry, I never changed it to completed. I apologize if you were expecting more
Well If you want more, Legend of the Burning Snow is my personal favorite. It's long but I'm more than proud of it. *Unsubtle advertising.*
5607354 Sorry for not clarifying, I had the feeling this was completed. I meant more of your stories.
5607359 Well I'm happy.
This story officially has 69 views. I know this is a big moment in any writer's career. Um, I'd like to thank the wife that I don't have. Uh, my family, who doesn't give a crap about what I do on FimFiction, and most of all, I'd like to thank my immaturity to even give this comment the time of day. Thank you for your time.
The twins may get the odd customer, but I'm sure the money they make is worth it.
This was lovely to read as I like the spa twins a lot.
5626419 thanks, it means a lot. And you know this story is one of a kind because it's not porn of these two. Seriously, why do the musicians and someone who sat on a bench like a human once have their own personalities while these two just have kinky stories? Whatever, those days are over now. I just got a killjoy.
Aw, the ending killed my mood after Lotus realized that Aloe told her secret.
Other than that, I loved the parts about the spa twins dealing with Discord and Chrysalis.
And speaking of Chrysalis, I loved how Chrysalis was being nice to the spa twins during the service.
5638143 Thanks, I'm glad I got that sisterly feel out of you at all. Sadly, it is tagged "Comedy" so I needed to put something funny in there.
Well ya never know what a world conqueror is like when she's off the clock.
Spa storys are hard to come by. Thanks for trying to write one. The setting is... Unique
Talk about costumers ESPECIALLY famous ones and your bussness is doomed!
No one complaints about paying , famous & regular costumers... That how you ruin you Bussness
Talking bad about costumers? Bad idea overall...
To a newspaper? THAT BUSSNESS SUICIDE.
That more than just tempting fate... That almost actual suicide... Seriously? Are-they-high?!
Serving a wanted Criminal. State enemy nr.1
Say hello to jail and goodbye to your Spa! Your ruined!
She took her sweet bloody time
Yeah... Pretty self explained how thats not working.
Telling to the Newspaper i mean!
FINALY A DESCENT SERVICE PROVIDER!
Your Spa duo still going to Jail for that...
That costumers service we wanne see and experience
Since when do a bath remove holes?
Really...? Seriously? That...
I cant even... 
A+ for trying to give us a nice Spa story.
A Tag that i rare to see
I rather dont try to give it a rating for... Obvious reasons...
Still i was laughing from the redicules nature
Interessting ... Comedy
5626464
Indeed. That alone is impressive
But a really relaxing reading experience is still not in my favorites
If anyone ever find one. Link please