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Hope...

Princess Celestia never wanted to banish her sister to the moon, and Luna never wanted to be so far away from her big sister. Things could have gone better, if there was still hope...

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Voldine

Voldine #1 · Feb 13th, 2015 · · ·

Your short description needs work.

Celestia Want's correct your capitalization and remove the apostrophe Luna back, comma splice! Replace this with a period or semicolon! Luna just want's remove the apostrophe to be loved, but add a a comma here with her banished on the moon with only the nightmare with her add a comma here how will things end? If only there was hope...