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I will be very honest, that first romantic scene between Luna and Jayden was beyond beautiful with the music choice. It perfectly displayed how he has settled in and how he feels for Luna, it made me literally cry and im not joking. Overall a brillant chapter,
Omg, all those Lion King references. She's going to eat me!... That took awhile for me to calm down from.
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Glad you liked it!
5653089 One other thing. Would have maybe expected (even just a single simple sentence) that Celestia would have apologized.
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Noted and fixed.
5653130 Alright. Would be strange if she didn't apologize. Like, she might actually like him in such a manner. So far, seems like relationships are 1 to 1. Meaning, there doesn't seem to be any second lover for the humans. Simply why I think it would have been strange.
Am I the only one who read the 'estrus' chase part with epic music?
6802128 no I did it too