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A very, veeery good 1 shot Cupcake fan sequel. I only noticed 2 mistakes.
"Now, since you're new. Let's see what kind of sound you make!" She pulled out a kitchen,
Did you mean kitchen knife?
I caught a glimpse of her soul when i appeared, it seemed... regretful.
It needs another capital for I.
Again, a very good fan sequel. 1 Like and fave for you.
I liked this a lot.
I spotted some minor mistakes. You might want to read it out loud to yourself and fix them up
Overall a very good read.Thanks for sharing.
Judge harshly, show no mercy! OR I'LL HAVE YOU COURT MARSHALED!
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Thanks, I already fixed 'em.
NO PONY KILLS SCOOTALOO!! I HATE THAT GUY! and thats why theres Apple Bloom.
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Hello, my name is... well, that's not important because this story is as unoriginal as the rest of the stories on this site!
I enjoyed this story. A very good one-shot.
excellent! I suggest listening to this, it sets the mood
[youtube=jo4i5mU8RV8]
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Fuck off troll. Equestria has no need for you!
Nice. I'm glad someone did something about her.