When tragedy befalls Ponyville and, more specifically, Twilight, how does she cope? What lengths will she go to for the sake of 'justice'? And what is Celestia hiding? Grief, loss and hatred can change anypony...
This is very well written, I was surprised but I admit I loved reading this. I can't think of any critism right now so I'll track this fic and hope this turns out as well as it started
Hoo boy, if Celestia turns, the world is doomed. Short of releasing Discord, there won't be anyone powerful enough to stop her. Who know,s he might actually be able to be helpful in such a situation.
Amazing. I can't wait to read more however one little note; "S-so that's all?" Fluttershy whispered. "Now what's going to happen." theres a question mark missing. That's all I can say abut it really! Well done
I think you made the right choice with Luna, at least in my few. It's getting REALLY interesting just watch on capitalisation and some of the speech marks are out of place in some parts. Nothing major.
I noticed you forgot to add a few question marks, other than that I love where this is going. I loved your portrayal of Derpy it really suits her in this situation. Worried though Anyway can'tw ait for the next chapter
I really like the concise style you've given this story. It works well for this type of plot. However, there are times when you seem to rush it a little bit. That being said, you've really pulled me in on this, and I usually hate zombie stories. Good show, mate. I look forward to see where this will go.
This is very well written, I was surprised but I admit I loved reading this. I can't think of any critism right now so I'll track this fic and hope this turns out as well as it started
A concept that has certainly been touched upon before. But the storytelling you present is certainly intriguing. Good Job!
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Thank you! :)
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It is a little difficult coming up with new stuff lol. Cannibalism is something I've always wanted to write a story on. thank you!!!
For some reason, as I read this I'm getting a 'Dead Island' vibe, even though no details have been given about this 'infection' yet.
All the attention the Zombie Theme is getting lately...must be a Zomb-pocalypse on the horizon...
324681 You're certainly welcome.
Love your story
cool shit
I feel like there isn't enough to describe the scene in some spots but I still think this is really good and I look forward to seeing more.
Hoo boy, if Celestia turns, the world is doomed. Short of releasing Discord, there won't be anyone powerful enough to stop her. Who know,s he might actually be able to be helpful in such a situation.
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Thanks! I've noticed that too. I tend to rush through some things. I'll do my best to be more descriptive.
Amazing. I can't wait to read more however one little note; "S-so that's all?" Fluttershy whispered. "Now what's going to happen." theres a question mark missing. That's all I can say abut it really! Well done
I think you made the right choice with Luna, at least in my few. It's getting REALLY interesting just watch on capitalisation and some of the speech marks are out of place in some parts. Nothing major.
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Thank you :) I get so excited when writing that I'm afraid I won't get all my ideas down and I lack in capitalization and punctuation lol!!
Seems like its getting good! Keep doing what your doing, and remember, we're here for ya!
This is going great, keep up the good work. The grammar and spelling are fine, nothing too bad at any given point
I noticed you forgot to add a few question marks, other than that I love where this is going. I loved your portrayal of Derpy it really suits her in this situation. Worried though Anyway can'tw ait for the next chapter
Poor Dinky.
And everypony else, soon enough.
Like the story so far, a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that, keep it up.
I really like the concise style you've given this story. It works well for this type of plot. However, there are times when you seem to rush it a little bit. That being said, you've really pulled me in on this, and I usually hate zombie stories. Good show, mate. I look forward to see where this will go.
I usually can't stand cross-overs/alternate universes/futuristic fics, but this is pretty impressive. I might read a few more zombie fics afterwards.
This is like the crazies disease thingy combine with a zombie virus.
Poor Derpy.
The world is a small place isn't it Paige. - Scotty.