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(Set in the Equestria Girls universe)

After an argument with Aria, Sonata set's out to find a summer job and prove her friend wrong that she can get a job, and keep it! After a day of having no luck with finding employment, Sonata tries her luck at one last place...

Moe's Southwest Grill!

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

Sonata, you funny girl! :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowwild:

Great story...!!!:pinkiehappy:

The sign above the entrance in beg red letters said, MOE’S Southwest Grill.

Big?

also, this looks like it will be fun.
tracking for now.

This is an interesting portrayal of the two less important Dazzling, er I mean Aria and Adagio. Most authors make them completely bitter and basically using Sonata as their punching bag, but here they're sensitive and almost maternal at times.

Comment posted by Awesomo3000 deleted Jan 30th, 2015

I'm interested. :pinkiehappy:

(This story will be set as if the events of Rainbow Rock's never happened, and the Siren's are just normal, high school girls)

Gonna need to add the Alternate Universe tag as well, then. Other than that, looking good so far.

I went to a couple of these in New York And they were AMAZING. Their food is so good and I would recommend to anybody that likes taco's burrito's and the likes. 10/10 would read again

5568829 Thanks for catching that! I start to make typos like that when I get tired. Part of the joys of writing late at night I suppose.

Hehe, I'm liking the story so far! It'll be very interesting to see Sonata working, I'm excited for the next chapter ^^

Awwww, I just wanted to hug her so bad when she ran off crying.

Oh, and just a nitpick.

already have all the help I need already.

I'd get rid of that second "already."

5572574 Glad you like it so far, and thanks for finding the typo. I always appreciate that.

As a diehard Sonata fan, I look forward to seeing where this story goes.

I also sympathize with her job problems. Took me years to find nice employment. And thankfully, I'm still there! :pinkiehappy:

“You see!” Arai called out,

You mean, Aria?

Other than that, this is a good start. I like to see where this goes.

For sonata it seemed that the reality of her situation was finally beginning to set in.

Sonata. Big S.

Carne Asada could already tell what he was dealing with a s far as Sonata was concerned.

as?

This way you can adjust to your job without feeling to overwhelmed.

too?

The two could hear her bellies audible growl of hunger.

I think it should be "bellie's".... but I'm not sure.

:rainbowlaugh: Carne Asada. who names their kids like that?

5590566 Thanks for the typo fixes. And it's the Equestria Girls world, everyone has crazy names, lol.

Just one little nit to pick on...

She made taco’s and burrito’s

If they're plural and not indicating possession, then you don't need an apostrophe. "Tacos" and "Burritos" is proper.

Besides that, very nice little read so far.

Keep 'em coming! You've got a winner right here.

This is very interesting so far; It'll bu fun to see how Sonata does on the job!

Hope to hear more of this story.

I've been binging on Dazzlings fics a lot lately....wonder why?

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