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Sparks is the lead pyrotechnician at the Ponyville Fireworks Company. Nothing brings him more joy than wowing ponies all over Equestria with his spectacular fireworks displays. Now that he's been commissioned to do the fireworks for the Grand Galloping Gala, it's more than just the crowd he wants to impress, but a certain Great and Powerful unicorn.

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This is freaking awesome.:raritystarry: And I love what you're doing with the Great and Powerful Trixie, I can tell this is going to get interesting :trixieshiftright: Can't wait for more!

Why do I, whenever I hear the neame Firecracker, I think Eddie Murphy?

Comment posted by Rammstein45 deleted Mar 28th, 2014

This is a very well written story, I love it! Can't wait for more! :pinkiehappy:

4295461 Thank you. I'm trying my best to make it easy for people to understand. Fireworks are my job so I know the terms for everything. It's hard writing this so everyone can follow along.

4296750 Don't worry about it, I'm finding the technical details a really cool part of the narrative, even if I don't understand it. :derpytongue2: Also you've been doing a good job of using other characters within the story (A.K.A. The guards and princesses) to explain the weird fireworks jargon.

4296793 You should check out some behind the scenes stuff for fireworks on YouTube. It's really cool what we do.

da hell?

WHY DIS STORY BE DOWNVOTED AND UNDERRATED SO MUCH?:pinkiegasp:

DIS BE NEEDIN VIEWS STAT!

This is amazing! Upvoted and fav'd! :D

I just got into reading this fanfic, now having read all 4 chapters, and I must say, your doing a really good job! The plot seems to be going well so far, and I have an ever- so- slight feeling that a Great and Powerful Unicorn will be in Ponyville soon enough :heart:.

Also, the characters are easy to relate to, whether it be Firecracker, being too easy to take things for granted, or Sparks, being shy around mares, but it's nice your cleaning up these flaws with some character development. I can't wait for Chapter 5!

This story has been very enjoyable. I hope more chapters will come up soon. Also what is it like working with explosives?

4572679 More will be coming soon! I promise. And working with Fireworks is the best thing I've ever done. Best job ever!

Yay! Update! :pinkiehappy: As always, excellent work, the pepper scene was hilarious and I'm looking forward to Shimmerwood. I'm gonna bet Trixie is there for some reason :trixieshiftleft:

Really loved this chapter can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!

What. What. What. NOOOOOOOOO!!!

SHE WAS SO CLOOOSE!!! :raritydespair:

*Deep breaths* Okay, I'm okay, I'm good. Dude! You better resolve this quick! But other than that total cliffhanger, great job as always!

A new update? Whoa that was fast! Hope it will end well for Sparks

Oh my gosh! This is awesome! Great work, as usual, can't wait for more! :twilightsmile:

How many chapter do you plan for this story?

4697408 Don't know. I never set a limit for myself. When you set limits, things get rushed and they aren't very good. I can tell you though, it probably wont be a short story. :twilightsmile:

Woah...:twilightoops: Did not see that coming, at all. Well done, I really like how you portrayed how the ponies in Ponyville would treat Trixie if she came back. As always, good job and can't wait for more!

Awesome chapter!!!! Loved the ending.....and I still can't believe you referenced the Jackson park express...!!!! Hahahaha

Awww, this was adorable! Excellent work, as usual, especially the portrayal of Twilight. Although...Ponies...:ajbemused:

I hope whoever started the fire gets punished to the full extent of the law, and then some. I think being locked in a cage surrounded by ten chain-smoking unicorns that burn the offender over the course of three days would be sufficient.

Also, good fic, the pacing is a tad weird at times, but the quality is good, and the dialogue flows well for the most part.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

Woo...Great chapter, need to see more of that family!!!!

"Yeah, she was talking in the 3rd person, so I'm pretty sure that's her name. I mean she didn't correct me when I called her that."

How many other performers came to Ponyville, talked in the third person when doing their stage show, had an Ursa Minor led to their wagon, got showed up because they didn't expect the Ursa Minor (that is my theory, and I'm sticking to it), and then got chased out of the town? Of course it's Trixie! :pinkiehappy:

This story doesn't have the amount of readers she deserves. Love this new chapter!

5935343 Thank you. It's because I shipped a canon with an OC. most people hate that.

Still an awesome storyline can't wait for the next chapters... especially Shimmerwood!!! :pinkiehappy:

Awesome!!!! Shimmerwood here we come, Cant wait for the next chapter!!:yay:

I just found this story can't wait for more. :heart: like and fav

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