• Published 24th Jan 2015
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Sunsarity The Fusion of Rarity and Sunset Shimmer - dbzponyninja



A pair of Potara earrings mysteriously wind up in the human world, Rarity and Sunset Shimmer put them on and become Sunsarity.

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Twilight's Failure

Sunsarity Story Three Twilight's Failure



Princess Twilight Sparkle and Spike went back through the portal and not only studied the ear rings but performed several tests on it as well maybe if she figured out what made them work then maybe she could find a way to separate her two friends back into two separate people.


After several hours of both studying and testing she wasn't any closer to figuring out what made the two ear rings work or why putting them on made two people combine into one person.



Princess Twilight sighed and told Spike "Come on Spike we have to tell Sunsarity the bad news."


Spike asked Princess Twilight "So she's going to be that way forever?"



Princess Twilight told Spike "I'm afraid so Spike, come on let's go through the portal."


Princess Twilight and Spike went through the portal, returned to Rarity's house and told Sunsarity the bad news.



Sunsarity asked Princess Twilight "So there's really nothing you can do?"


Princess Twilight told Sunsarity as she struggled to hold back tears "I'm afraid so, I tried my best but I came up with nothing, I failed you, I'm a bad friend and I don't deserve my title as The Princess of Friendship."



Sunsarity told Princess Twilight "Hey now don't say things like that you tried your best and did everything that you could, it's my fault for putting on those ear rings in the first place even though I'm not wearing them anymore, if anyone is to blame here that would be me."



Sunsarity told her friend as she gave her a hug and Princess Twilight returned the hug "Come here you look like you need a hug."


Sunsarity and Princess Twilight along with Spike all went downstairs and told Rarity and Sweetie Belle that the person standing before them is the combination of Rarity and Sunset Shimmer in the same body and that she lied when she told Sweetie Belle to tell them that she caught a mysterious illness from Equestria and that she was sorry for telling her own sister to lie to her parents.




Then when the next day came Sunsarity and Sweetie Belle went to school together and they along with Princess Twilight and Spike told all the students and teachers plus Vice Principal Luna and Principal Celestia that the person standing before them is the combination of Rarity and Sunset Shimmer in the same body.


Whether she liked it or not Sunsarity was here to stay and there was no going back to her being two separate people. The End.

Author's Note:

Coming Soon The Life of Sunsarity

Comments ( 9 )

So what instrument do they play now.

5853306 Good question I'll think about it when I write the first story in Life of Sunsarity, my planned sequel series.

5853578 And I shall wait.

5853578
Woah! Woah! Hold your horses! Sequel? You have one chapter are two... half chapters? I don't know what to call them!

You need help on this. I'm not bashing your story in any way! I just think you need some modifications. For example:

Sunsarity and Princess Twilight along with Spike all went downstairs and told Rarity and Sweetie Belle that the person standing before them is the combination of Rarity and Sunset Shimmer in the same body and that she lied when she told Sweetie Belle to tell them that she caught a mysterious illness from Equestria and that she was sorry for telling her own sister to lie to her parents.

Twilight is telling Rarity and Sweetie Belle that Rarity and Sunset Shimmer fused? Shouldn't Rarity's parents know about this?

Tid bits like those. If I can help, I will, so let me know. This is an amazing idea, but it needs training wheels before a hype train can form.

5856693 Oh I didn't even notice that little mistake thanks for telling me about it.

I can't wait for the sequel. It'll be interesting...

6188386 Thank you, I'm glad that you like the story although I'm still trying to decide when to write the sequel.

Feels like it coulda been fleshed out more. Overall, not bad, just coulda been better. Props to being the only fusion story actually finished

I like this fic though i must say the ending is a bit of a downer, there will be consequences as a result of this fusion if a sequel happens I just know it. Hopefully they can find a way to defuse

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