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A young Spitfire sat down on that blue park bench in Manehattan Park as the rain poured down on her. It seemed like everything had been going smoothly, life was on a good track . . . and it all fell apart on her in the span of a day. She found herself alone, scared and drenched.
But she also found herself sitting next to a stallion with a hidden connection to her not-so-distant past, willing to listen to her troubles . . . and keeping a wing over her head.

Note: Beware the "Complete" rating; this is currently a one-shot that can/will be continued if enough support is given for it.

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 17 )

I'd like to see more. Also... What did he do?! I'm so confused. Also if you end up needing an editor, feel free to message me.

I've always liked SoarinFire as a ship in my honest opinion. I like to see them as at least close friends despite them making mistakes at times, and as far as the close friends part goes, this fic captures it well. It was a nice read and I'm glad that I read it, but I can't help but think that it could benefit from being expanded upon a little bit. If you do decide to do that, it's up to you on how you'd do it, but I'd recommend expanding the relationship between Soarin and Spitfire. It's already established, but I would like to know a little more. Anyway, I'll give this an upvote, and I wish you the best of luck on your future stories. :twilightsmile:

It would be nice to see more of this. I liked this story.

I second the follow-up.

This is one of the few one-shots I really enjoyed reading, I assume you take inspiration from belief? Cuz that's like everyone's favourite clopfic:rainbowlaugh:

8924223
My favorite too. It's so beautifully written it would make a great standalone story with the cloppy parts carved out. Pretty ironic that his first clopfic also happens to be his best work.....If you care to read the rest of his stuff it almost seems like they're not from the same person :raritycry:

8924816
I never read his other fics but seriously,
Nothing could be better than that

8924901
Yeah Wild Sky Yonder's great but Belief's really what gets me into soarinfire. I can never get over the kind of romance in which two protagonists inspire each other unknowingly and help each other's way to the top. Soarin wouldn't get where he is today without Spitfire's encouragement and Spitfire would never become the team captain without her colthood friend. That's what makes Belief such an emotional read, the fact that they only find out each other's secret when they get intimate makes it so much hotter.

8925060
Hell yes, and Wild Sky Yonder is one of my top favs too, it’s such adventurous and full of Soarinfire in the same time

8925156
You took the words right out of my mouth, WSY's da fic that really introduced me to this fandom, there's no better fic, (except Belief maybe) period. And the man himself just got back from a 5 year vacation. Sometimes I still shake my head in disbelief: did it really happen?

It did.

8925190
Ikr, I was just reading WSY like fourth time? Then I saw new chapter after all of these years, it made me pretty happy :rainbowkiss:

8925193
Same haha, I was still overjoyed that he came back:rainbowkiss:

As they say, better late than never.

More would be cool. It's a pretty nice story thus far

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