• Member Since 31st May, 2014
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Captain Dash


Your friendly neighborhood shipper of Spitfire and Soarin'

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After being accepted into the top academy for pegasi in Equestria, Spitfire and Soarin' set out to prove that they are elite fliers. Will their budding relationship be able to survive the struggles of academy life? When everyone is out to become the best, the real war is who to trust.

My Wonderful Editor: Zennyth

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 16 )

Ah, good ol Soarin/Spitfire in the academy. Getting major nostalgia from 2012.

Odd. But intriguing. Worth the follow as I want to see where you take this.

Cool! This is realy good! :moustache: spike thinks so too.

4508516 Thank you! I'm glad you (and spike) enjoy it!:moustache:

Well color me pleasantly surprised.

First of all let me say that I'm really happy to see someone tackling a SoarinFire story. I've said it numerous times, but I'll say it again, there are too few stories with these two. Figured it would've been a shoe in, since Spitfire and Soairn' are almost always together, and this fandom has made ships out of far less with characters.

Secondly I would like to congratulate you writing this story well so far. Out of the very few SoarinFire stories out there, even fewer manage to be written well (believable dialogue, pacing, description, grammar, etc.)

And it's not just a random love story from the looks of it (not that I have a problem with those), we've actually got a pretty compelling setup with the first chapter. Nice twist at the end of that one by the way. I thought it was Soarin' or Spitfire's father.

In conclusion, I'll be watching this one. SoarinFire is best ship after all! Best of luck in your writing!

4517123

Wow, it's like you've taken the words right out of my mouth. I wholeheartedly agree!

I was honestly a little skeptical to begin with. It's unfortunate, but a lot of the newer stories trying to get established on this site, especially by a first-time author, are pretty mediocre and it shows right from the start.

This story in the other hand, is very promising. This author has done some excellent work so far, and I'm very keen on seeing how this goes! I'd have to say the Spitfire-Soarin' ship is my favorite in all the fandom.

Heck, I'd even be willing to help out if there is a need for it.

4519220 Any help is good help! Anything to get the story out there is huge...

4517123 Thanks for the feedback!

Before I continue reading, I just gotta say... Soarin and Spitfire's meeting was hilarious! As was the dinner.

I like his room mate,.... that will be ...interesting...

I do hope this story isn't dead. Because its GOOD!

You have some really nice ideas behind it and are/were developing them well.

4519220 What does the writing in your avatar say?
5411658 The wolves in your avatar are from a movie called Alpha and Omega, right?

5505610 That they are. Nice to see someone recognise them.

Well, it's been a long time hasn't it? A quick FAQ:

Q: Did you die?
A: No, I am still amongst the living.
Q: Are you going to keep writing?
A: Yes. Eventually. Work, college, and homework gives me little to no time until the summer.
Q: Are you at least close to putting out something new?
A: Almost done with the next chapter.
Q: This story's cover photo is lacking to the material inside. Will you get something better?
A: Yes, once I can find a better artist.
Q: When can we expect something new?
A: POSSIBLY next week whilst I'm on Spring Break laying in bed from getting my wisdom teeth yanked.

Always thankful for your comments, favorites, likes, follows, and the such. Feel free to keep them coming in any way shape or form! I would love for my story to get some more publicity once I'm able to start writing frequently again.
Thanks to all the fans!
-Cap'n

First of all it's refreshing to see some new soarinfire content,there are too few stories of these two IMO.With that being said,we can often see Soarindash or Spitdash,but Soarinfire?Maybe once in a blue moon and it usually gets little to no attention.
What surprises me is,this story is not only well-written but also efficiently-organized so I'm sitting here waiting 4 the next chapter.:D

Loving this story so far, it's really good.

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