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ColdGoldLazarus


Tired, But Trying (Taking Hope In G5)

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The previous night, they had all gone to sleep in Ponyville, safe and secure. Now, they awake in a clearing in an unfamiliar forest.

The world has changed. The year is on a completely different calendar. Civilization consists of three small cities divided by a quartet of lakes. The local ponies' customs are achingly familiar and yet completely alien, particularly in the way they keep the races seperate and worship two completely unknown Alicorns called the Wardens. But worse still - this new world is under attack from familiar foes, and Twilight and her friends are the only ones who can defend it.

Yet there's something wrong about this all, something being hidden from them, and Twilight is determined to find out what - no matter what it takes.

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Nice mystery. Kinda reminds me of the story Harmony Theory. Can't wait to hear the context of this society.

7446632 Thanks! I need to catch up on that one, but I remember it being really great, so I'll be happy if this ends up even half as good. :twilightsmile:

And that'll be all in good time. :raritywink:

So were they transported into the future... or into the past? Either way, you're off to a good start. I'll be watching this.

7572512 Something along those lines. :raritywink: And thanks! I hope it doesn't disappoint. :twilightsmile:

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