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Pinkie Dash

Pinkie has been in an accident and because of every other Mane 6 member being unavailable, Rainbow Dash has been asked to help Pinkie recover. Pinkie and Dash realize love isn't just an emotion...it is a temporary madness that actually lasts forever.

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Oatz

Oatz #1 · Nov 10th, 2011 · · ·

Well written so far.

#2 · Nov 10th, 2011 · · ·

A great idea, but it feels rushed, and there are definite grammatical errors. I'm also a bit peeved by the sudden presence of phones in Equestria.

ChromeRegios

ChromeRegios #3 · Nov 14th, 2011 · · ·

28840 maybe the phone's are in a form of a magical device. . made recently?

Bubbleshy

Bubbleshy #4 · Dec 8th, 2011 · · ·

Very decent beginning to the story. I pray you continue this, because it looks like one of those fics that will flow well.

TimbukTurnip

TimbukTurnip #5 · Dec 25th, 2011 · · ·

Would be interested in seeing this continue; it looks like it has potential, just needs fleshing out a bit

Arthtrott

Arthtrott #6 · Feb 17th, 2012 · · ·

It's okay to be less than perfect. Sometime we need to write just to learn to write better next time. Your story is full of potential but it's okay to move on to other stories and other hobbies that will help you to become a more whole person, this will show up in your writing in future. plz don't stop. We are all here to support each other. You are never alone.

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