A certain pony has a problem: She has long wished to be the Apple of Flutter's eye. One day the pegasus herself wants to come over and Applejack opens the door to find her crush holding flowers! Is her luck finally changing?
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Why are there so little views? It's good so far.
Edit: Sorry about the down vote, I accidentally clicked it instead of up, and it won't let me change it for some reason.
This isn't actually as bad as I feared. Needs some work, but no biggie. Keep it up!
Well, I like this. I look forward to seeing where this will go, so keep it up. *Upvotes and favorites*
Few grammar and spelling errors, but nothing too bad.
Dude, I'll be blunt. This is pretty bad. Applejack is completely out of character and rather whiny. It's just...bad.
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Well, thanks for being honest. I don't think it's too outlandish for the stubborn pony with a macho reputation to not be in her element around soppy emotions, especially with things going wrong every time she builds herself up to it, but I'm glad you didn't anonymously downvote.
I love this to pieces, and to my favorites it goes, nah, to my featured favorites it goes.
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Eep, thank you! 
Glad you enjoyed it!
Really?
Well that was blunt, but hey he's honest.
All the while I was getting frustrated with Applejack, but I think it is because I refrain from speaking to women I know about wanting to date them. I saw too many memories in the fic I guess, I like it when I can relate to a story.
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Nice to see someone who can be mature when criticized. You're alright.
Hello! Have a review. (Okay, you're unlikely to see this, but never mind.) Certainly easy light reading, and points for honesty in the end A/N. A bit formulaic, though, and not all the characterisation convinced, especially not Pinkie Pie's.