Favorite pony? PINKIE PIE!! Favorite genre? Clop
Applebloom would like a special some pony but when Snips asks her out she rethinks the idea of having one. After a heart to heart with Applejack she thinks Snips might not be a bad choice for a special some pony. Will she change her mind completely and let Snips into her heart? Or forever be ashamed and embarrassed at the idea of dating such a colt?
Date ideas need.
No clop or gore please.
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Cute story. I love the idea, and I think you did an adorable job with it. There were a few grammatical errors, but not enough to be a bother. Overall, it's pretty enjoyable.
It's actually pretty good. media.giphy.com/media/Jir3toQTWW9Ne/giphy.gif
Your never going to find another colt like him.
That's what I hopping for!
Lol XD I never heard that one before
In the mlp comics wasn't Shining Amor a nerd too?
5511611 Yep he was, my bf considers him his spirit pony since they play the pony version of Dungeons and Dragons
5510880 Thank you very much I'm glad you enjoyed it
Maybe she should just buck him in the jaw. That should make him get the hint...
5514172 hahahaha you're funny!
5521314 wow thank u! yeah ive been thinking about this ship for a while. thought it'd be cute
This is cute, keep it up <3
I don't like being a crtitic but Babes if from Manehattan not from fillydelohia. Or how ever those places are spelled. But otherwise nice chapter.
5535528 Oh crap! My mistake!
At first I could "bullshit Luna travels into ponies dreams not Cadence!" Then you came up with the love thing that really interest me. Nice job
5559753 Thank you i figured if luna had a job like that Cadance should have one too. so Luna said "Cadance! You're up!"
Why are they acting like they never met the colts before when they go to the same freaking school?
And where are Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon?
5566361 just you wait........ they're coming!!!!! mhahahahaha
loved it! I thought Snips was rather forward (uncharacteristically so, for anypony) in the previous chapters but gotta have plot right?
5570725 thank you i'm glad you like it. I wanted there to be an unexpected side of Snips thats charismatic and charming when he likes a filly
5572603 hahahaha yeah scootaloo and rumble I ship that so hard!
"...and remember, Diamond Tiara, this 'nerd' eventually became Captain of the Royal Guard."
I expected Diamond Taira to show up and ruin everything
I didn't like this chapter as much as the others.. it didn't seem to flow as well. It seemed unlikely that such direct bullying occurred in the classroom, unnatural that Twilight and Cadence visit the school both at the same time, that neither of them nor Cheerilee would mention Diamond Tiara or Silver Spoons very straightforward tactics at bullying during the Q&A, and worst of all the Crusaders were referred to their coltfriends for support when it was apparent that they were feeling down, not to each other or perhaps Snips helping Sweetie Belle directly for instance. instead we get
It was as if the story were saying "coltfriends are the answer" but meanwhile we all know that FRIENDSHIP is magic.
I also find it a little cliché that all of the CMC have coltfriends now not to mention that they apparently rely on them quite a bit as earlier mentioned. I thought the other two were just dates and I was looking forward to seeing the dynamic of only Apple Bloom having a coltfriend. I guess this way I can look forward to triple or double dates? It might even be a decent idea to go back and tell the tale of the other CMC's relationships and how they occurred, though I'm sure it's been done a bunch with SB & BM.
Don't get me wrong, I really enjoy this series, I have many stories on my watch list and when I saw this chapter uploaded I was kind of excited to get to read it as it's a very simple and cute story - a nice contrast from AppleDashery or whatever else I decide to read. I look forward to seeing more of this story. Thank you very much ndisfoshiz
5607099 Thank you sweet heart. I wasn't too happy proud of this one but over all i think its good. I knew I wanted something with silver spoon and diamond tiara and this was the best i got. don't worry the next chapter will be even better. I believe every writer has that chapter they aren't too happy about but put it in because it helps with the story.
5606182 nope she does that in the next one
5605174 point: NERDS RULE!!!!!!!!!!
Is this the last chapter?
5673205 no sweetheart, ive been busy and hav had no time to write. check my blog post for more info
:P that last line, lol I love it :P
The super sweet drink was also the same as #4, it just tasted super sweet after tasting the super sour drink
also #4 is an aphrodisiac