Spike gets it into his head to become a hero. A wealthy dragon socialite who fights evil under the guise of El Spikeo. The most fearless toughest sword fighting swashbuckling dragon around. Errors insue as he, and his bumbling musical sidekicks Snips and Snails attempt to thwart the dastardly Prince Blueblood and his villianous puddingnapping ways. A light hopefully chuckle inducing and heartwarming tale.
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Decent story. Made me smile a few times, never quite got a laugh though.
I gave you 4.5/5 stars. It was great but had it's issues, I got a couple of laughs during the story and had fun with it. There were a number of small spelling errors. I love the part where snips and snails were about to sing the Gilligan's island theme song
Peace Out.
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Glad you liked this one a little better than the last
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Glad I got some chuckles. Snips and Snails as Gilligan and the Skipper I dare you to unthink it now. I'm pretty bad at catching my spelling errors. When I proofread my brain has a tendency to autocorrect my mistakes so I tend to miss them
As has been said, this story definitely has a few mistakes, but they don't keep it from being a very enjoyable read!
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Thanks!
Formatting and grammar really isn't that good, but the story and characterization is great. As much I'd love to give it a 5/5 for how much I enjoyed it and how cute it was, I have to dock off at least a half point because it was hard to read with how the paragraphs are structured.
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Thanks. I am pretty bad with grammer and spelling. I've been trying to get a pre-reader for ages.
Espiga.