I write pony words that people seem to like. I also review fics and draw purty pictures, apperently. I'm an older fan of MLP, so expect a lot of 80's references.
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I saw the cover image, and I could only think of this guy:
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Playful and hot! Thank you.
I may not have been first, but I am the longest. Suck it!
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You're welcome!
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This comment made me chuckle more than it should have.
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More importantly, despite Adam's best efforts, I'm still the longest. Sorry Adam, you don't quite measure up.
Oh, before I forget, 5502904 , you asked in the thread for feedback. So, lemme be the first to give some.
Now, is this, "Third Times a Charm" or "Dreams Really do Come True?" Given the repeated actions that are both real and in Twilight's dream in the previous non-mature prompts, I suppose it's a bit of both? The fantasy role play aspect of the fic feels very in character for these two, given their canonical past, and Twi subbing for Tia is pretty much a given. The standard roles they play work well when turned toward the erotic. That's why the StudentxTeacher angle is so frequently used in Twilestia.
Even though the trope is common, you used it well here and played up the right strengths of that power/authority dynamic and the two respective characters' most recognizable traits. The exploration into the - I don't want to really call it mild sadomasochism, it's more sensation/sensitivity play that re-enforces the domination aspect - is a good choice and builds on the momentum you establish at the start. The only part of it that stuck out to me was Twilight realistically not orgasming from the paddling. But that's a good thing, because far too often we see it leading to the climax by itself. While that's certainly possible, for most folks, it's just simply not going to happen. So kuddos there on surprising me!
Overall, the pacing is good, if a touch quick, but hey...that's a prompt for you. It's a very good prompt though and I'm super glad you wrote this. If we could give awards of a prompt that can carry a collab a long way, this one would win it so far. The other prompts have been good too, but this is an exemplar of a mature prompt done right and done well.
Oh sweet Jesus what have you unleashed?
~Skeeter The Lurker
Oh, guilty pleasure. Taboos are magic.
5502931 And here I was trying to be short with mine.
Purple Smart is stinkin' cute here! The aliterations are also awesome.
That cover reminds me that someone sometime should write a futa fic for this collab.
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I'm going to frame this, OK?
Also, be on the lookout for the Extended Edition(TM) Coming Soon(TM)
>mfw this exists
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Toldja I was gonna. I done and gonna.
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fairy nuff
remember to write some anthro futa pr0n for me lad ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)
Fuzzy.
You actually did it.
... I'm speechless.
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I'm not, I know exactly what to say.
Encore! Encore! I hope to see more in the future.
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We are currently taking bets on when we'll have the first futa prompt. Running best guess at the moment is 5 prompts before futa is breached.
THE COVER MAKES ME LAUGH SO MUCH RIGHT NOW!!!
Well, this could be interesting...
-SYA, The Horse
It has happened and it's live, this is awesome. Also I do like the cover, got a good laugh from it.
Ooh boy....
Uuuuhhhh......hhuuuuuhhh...
Eeee-......hhmmm.....eeee-something.....
"Volcano of stress and ready to blow twilight"
I'm sure I read it
rightwrong..This is very good but continuation to how Twilight reacts and maybe accept what Celestias explanation is for what was happening.
Fuzzy may have stolen my title for being the longest, but I'll be damned if someone steals the title for concentrated pony sex.
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Come back and read Exploration. Hehe.
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Challenge me not, young padawan. Lose, you will.
I am confused.
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By what?
5530836 The feelings of utter disgust and extreme sexiness at the same time.
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Then, I think, I technically achieved classical grotesque story-telling.
Sorta sorry, but thank you?
Odd, just odd.
Aha! You didn't edit for mechanics, you edited for content to earn a proper place in here. I indeed see what you did there.
You know,, this looks quite in-character and believable. Not gross or anything, this kind of crazy actually feels very natural for two bored immortals. Well, apart from the whole 'virgin goddess' idea, never could understand it really.
Not sure if you succeeded in the 'grotesque' part though.
Did this chapter get fan art by Bri-Sta or was it inspired by Bri-Sta's pic?
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Either way I'm loving both of these.
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The fic came first. I'm loling since it was clop that inspired fanart and not any of my other stellar writing.
Well, that sure was something. I just don't know what.
Actually, "what" describes it pretty well, I think.
Can someone who is more familiar with this particular fetish tell me if this qualifies as vore or not?
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It is not Vore, as no one gets eaten fully or partially. Celestia's bits might be a little spread out, but they are all still connected and working.
Took 9 prompts.
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Sorta proud of that, oddly.
want more o.o plz
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I totally called the author, though.
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It's 'gore' not 'vore' vore is voracity, eating others,
Gore is blood, dismembership, insides become outsides etc.
Get wrecked Celestia.
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What. The fuck. Is this.
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