• Published 12th Jan 2015
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A Dragon Shinobi’s Path to Peace - Spiral Dragon Pony



Spike learns who he was in his past life and must master his powers, old and new, while bringing peace to those who betrayed him

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Comments ( 14 )

Okay, you have my interest.

I spotted at least 4 errors in just the summary alone... but I'll try not to focus on the grammatical problems and try to just focus on the story, or more particularly at why Naruto's spirit/energy/whatever is in ponyville (since that's my biggest question right now)

Please continue

Could use some work with grammar and pacing. Will watch for now, if only to see where it goes

PLEASE! CONTINUE THIS!

GOOD LUCK!

BRUH keep going u mixed 2 of m my face characters in history.

It is good, exception of that Naruto canon bit of liking that pink banshee, but otherwise good. If your not going to continue it though man at least give it to another so they can.

wish this had a update. SO MUCH PONTENIL!

Good story so far:pinkiesmile:
I'm excited for more

it was good but it went to fast and it needs fixing

i'm sad :fluttercry: i was getting into this story. Hopefully he ever continues this.

Will this continue?
Who were the 3 figures at the end there?

Would Spike have pervy thoughts of Luna too?

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