Oh, fuck yes. Will be reading this when I get back online soon!

And once this is over, we'll beat the living hell out of Mr. Flim and Mr. Flam

That one sentence sums up why Luna is awesome.

oh my fucking god. i am so glad this exists. thank you. thank you. thank you. thank you. tha

this is amazing.

Looks promising.

It's a good thing this world operates on magical pigment proteins, or Rarity would be a toasted marshmallow by the end of this.

And call me crazy, but I'm not seeing any penalties for not tugging tops. A few half-hearted attempts here and there, and they have an airtight counter-technicality. Unless, of course, the Flimflams decide on a last-second retroactive condition change that invalidates everything regardless of what happens, but I doubt even they would act in that level of bad faith. Of course, they're unlikely to get any return customers on this one as it is...

I know, I know. I'm overanalyzing. It's how I have fun.

5493385 Let's just say that the girls determined to win at any cost are going to create the impetus for full, willing participation.

hahaha. this was inevitable. Celestia is evil.

This is going to be EPIC.

Oh, this looks so awesome. I'd want spike to be there so he can at least watch and get a good eye show. And maybe even get hugged in between some of the girls. He would love it for sure.

"And once this is over, we'll beat the living hell out of Mr. Flim and Mr. Flam," Luna concluded.

MythrilMoth, you know you have to write that part at the end, right? Who doesn't want to see Flim and Flam get pulverized by all these lovely ladies?

I'm here for the comedy only...but I would like to point one thing out.

Any girl under 18 would need parental permission for even the original version of the intended event, so it would be a good idea to mention that a permission slip is included as part of the sign up form. Without a parent or guardian giving consent, I can guarantee a number of parents would be suing the school system after this alteration.

With parental permission, well, the promoters that changed the contract become the targets of the parent's outrage.

Here we go...

5493385 I get the feeling the promoters of the event might try to argue that the organizers of the event did not honor their changes. I'd make a point about how no court would honor such an agreement, but the city allowed their school to put on a public event involving almost-naked students, underage-or-near-it.

The concept is so relevant to my interest, I immediately read the predecessor before I read this (well, that and the concept of said predecessor is also relevant to my interest). I certainly didn't get disappointed by either.

A really ridiculous amount of tits is my favorite amount of tits, so I very much approve.

The contest has gone tits up.

.... I'll just leave now.

5493446 This is the same universe where Sunset Shimmer and the Dazzlings managed to get into school without...any kind of a background check whatsoever. Our rules do not seem to apply here. (And who said they're even under 18? It isn't Earth and they're not normal humans as we know them...they could all be 19 or 20 for all we know...)

5493491 I'd still argue that parental consent would be required, like for a field trip.

5493508 Here's a thought. How about we stop overanalyzing this and accept it for what it is and enjoy the tits?

5493516 My personal preference for this fic is in schadenfreude. Can I enjoy the shenanigans instead?

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Any chance Adaigo and company will be in this?

Is it bad that I want to participate in this race? Like really want to participate in this race? I'm sorry, but once I heard what kind of race it was I got excited.

Flim and Flam, you guys are geniuses. Absolute geniuses.

oh this is gonna be good....

5493582 Very yes.

5493599

5493618 What? I'm a freak, okay? My fiance already knows that about me, so sue me!

I approve of this.

Well, this cannot end well...
...
...except for us readers, that is.

5493627 I got no problem with it. You just short-circuited me there for a second.

I ... Um ... hmm. This could either be good, or not so ...

I'm gonna opt to see this pony run a bit before deciding.

5493446
Actually, if they are underage and this is happening, technically any student who gets her top yanked off can have her family sue Flim and Flam for putting their child into underage pornography. Since this wasn't part of the original contract when signed, the school isn't liable for it.

Then again, considering junior and senior students were the only ones allowed, they're all probably 16-18, and the age of consent is probably 16 in this world...

Either way, looking forward to seeing Flim and Flam get beaten to a pulp at the end, and I fully expect Pinkie Pie to win.

5493655

Yeah, most people are very surprised whit how upfront I am about that sort of stuff. Surprisingly, I've never written clop, or anything known for sexual content.

5493491

It isn't Earth

Isn't that overstating the case just a teensy bit? It's obviously not our Earth, what with the names and range of coloration, but I see no reason to get hot-and-bothered with the idea of it being an Earth. After all, "Alternate Earth" covers a lot of ground.

5493778 "OUR" Earth was implicit there. No need to split hairs.

5493810 I was speaking more generally, though. I only used that comment as a jumping off point. Admittedly, it probably would have been a better fit for one of your old blog post threads.

5493696

Well, there was that one time Twilight slept with her brother

Fantastic

Behold, the return of Sunstreak!

So if we ignore how ludicrous and improbable the premise is...

...I think we're going to have some fun with this.

In case you haven't figured it out yet, this story is going to be about comedic sociopathy and tits.
Lots of tits.
Like, a really ridiculous amount of tits.

While I already know this story is going to be hilarious, this summary has told me I was wrong, it will in fact be glorious!

-BiomasterM2

p.s. I really can't believe Celestia and Luna went through with the marathon idea from the previous story without being murdered by everyones parents, that's some luck they have.

Aw shit, i haven't even read the first one yet.

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5493516

Does this mean that that when Derpy loses her top, one boob is an inny and one's an outy?

Well I know what I'll be looking forward to.

Also, I applaud Flim and Flam

5493840 THat was hot, but it wasn't graphic, nor did I go into detail. I just let the reader fill in the blanks. That's how I got away with everything I did in Inner Demons. LOL

this story is going to be about comedic sociopathy and tits.

Ah, my two favorite things, rolled into one massive ball of awesome.

5493560 Oh my god, that gif is awesome.

While the contestants plan how they'll beat up Flim and Flam, the spectators will be beating off to tits and pant(ies).

Can you make a bonus chapter about what happened with Lightning Dust, that would be good.
I'm looking forward to Flim and Flam getting pummelled into dust.