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Steve is a failed Agent in the Spy Agency of Equestria. But, his big break comes when doing an odd job for Pinkie Pie, he discovered that a sinister plot is brewing that could shake the very foundations of Equestria to their core.
Takes place after season four.
A quick shout out to my awesome editor/proofreader BladeStrike for helping me out!
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The first time I misread the title, I thought the story was about Steve Jobs in Equestria.
5476434 that could be an interesting idea for a story
Intriguing. I will watch this.
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Thanks! Next chapter should be up sometime next week
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Lose the .22, besides the wrist mounted crossbow seems more bad@ss, I would(you dont NEED to) change him from yellow coat to gray or dark blue, just a darker color. Besides yellow is the most "eye attracted color" not so good for a spy and not to much waiting for spy or pinkie for each other, seems more sinister when a crime is commited in broad daylight, and in public, also a turtle stuck in a cloud.....really? 250 jusy for accepting the job.....really? A james bond reference would be nice "names Colt, Elusive Colt" besides that I looking forward to the next chapter
5513487 the Bond reference might be seen as forced though. Not to sound annoying, but I was hoping for a critique on the overall story, found any plot holes, and my grammar ect. Still glad you like it though!
5545321 (no offense) took ya long enough, anyway, im just saying how is equestria already have powder weapons, not only that but sone decent one's as well? The wrist mounted crossbow is fired by muscle movements, and could be used as a hidden blade And yellow IS the most eye attracted color. encrypted-tbn3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcTkpGlm_1XxKGfzeYcGjnPS3JG8TCvS2ZgSnDTFS8hGbZdGdfcG