Adagio takes a spill during an attempt to gather energy. It's something the other two sirens aren't likely to let her forget for a long time.
Inspired by this video and a conversation between Tired Old Man and myself.
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All the while, St. Giver watches over the girls and thinks, "Meh. It's an improvement."
--Spade
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Haha, that was absolutely hilarious to read! The pacing of events felt natural, and their characterizations were just great. Fantastic job! :D
Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious.
I just about died laughing. Especially at Aria's bizarre speeches.
Laughing The whole. Time. This was excellent
10/10
Every story you write with these girls is gold!
Loved it!
They are so mean to each other and so dumb.
They really need to give the Dazzlings their own group tag.
Did anyone else think of Attack on Titan?
Sonata: >eating a taco<
Adagio: >looks at Sonata< "Hey, you there. What do you think you're doin'?"
Sonata: >continues eating a taco<
Adagio: "YOU ARE OFFICIALLY ON MY SHIT LIST! JUST WHO IN THE HELL ARE YOU?!"
Sonata: >swallows; salutes< "Sonata Dusk from Equestria at your service! Reporting for duty, ma'am!"
Adagio: "Sonata Dusk, huh? And what is that you're clutching in your right hand?"
Sonata: "A taco. It sat there in the mess hall demanding to be eaten. Ma'am!"
Adagio: "The theft. I understand. But here? Why eat it here of all places?"
Sonata: "It looked quite delicious. And it was getting cold. So I gave it shelter in my stomach, ma'am."
Adagio: "Why? I can't comprehend. Why would you eat that taco?"
Sonata: "Are you asking me why people eat tacos? I'm surprised you don't know, ma'am..."
>everyone looks on in disbelief<
Sonata: >impossibly breaks the taco in half< "Here, ma'am. Have half."
Adagio: "'Have half'. Really?"
Sonata: >smiles<
Later...
>Sonata is running laps<
Aria: "I thought Adagio was gonna kill Taco Girl..."
Rainbow Dash: "I know. What a hell of a first day..."
Yet another glorious Siren comedy created from your brilliant mind. Justice, you've done it again!
Somewhere in the world, Corey Taylor sneezed.
Man, sometimes I wonder if every other conversation Justice and I have turns into a story idea at some point down the line.
Because if it isn't that, it's every other other conversation.
Still, if it helps makes stuff like this happen, I guess I have no reason to complain.
...wait, where was I? Oh, right, praise. Pleasure editing/reading your nutjob sirens as always, Justice.
Why can I not stop laughing every time you mention Adagio's Narcissism Cave?
Another great Dazzling fic, hopefully you continue to do more in the future, as I feel yours are some of the best of these three on Fimfic.
Rush and Pony on!
T4E
5465544 LOL EXACTLY XD
I love your characterization of the Sirens as always. You've gone into a lot of detail of the relationship between Aria and Sonata before, but it was great to see how Adagio is so vitally needed as a leader, as she is constantly needed to keep the other two borderline-sociopaths from careening off into a never-ending series of vicious catfights worthy of reality television.
Oh man that reminded me of American dad! XD
Aww, this is a cute story. How can you be sad when you've got friends who'll shove tacos under your door to cheer you up?
That was so cute, just simply touching on the relationship between the Sirens.
Is that cover art from the actual movie? I would probably remember that scene.
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It from the video linked in the description. It should've been an extra on the DVD.
This is a really funny fic!
Great job!
I have begun reading fics that have Adagio in them almost exclusively ever since the second movie came out. I have to say I enjoyed your Christmas fic much more as the dialogue here doesn't remotely fit the dazzlings in my opinion. I know its a shot at comedy but I couldn't suspend my disbelief enough to laugh, even internally. Looking at the other comments though, I can tell I'm the crappy outlier raining on your parade....sorry.
Yep... Sonata is psycho. There's no doubt about it--definately Psycho.
(I fail at puns...
)
Lol. Entertaining as always.
That was genius, as with the rest of Sonata's lines
We did it again, Justice. You should hear the last bits of this live readaloud.
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This seems like most siblings or good friends who want to rip each other's throats out
I... I... I CAN'T BREATHE!
Sonata wanting to be in Adagio's boots with what sounds like she's never been able to take a peaceful shower in ages. xD
Freaking Aria and Sonata are best not-so-friends one not-so-friend could ever wish for. Their family bond/friendship they have is the best kind. Freaking jerks. But honest jerks! <3
These three need their own spinoff series. Go pitch it!
And so the world was saved because Adagio made a public spectacle of herself.
5524105 Because of you, I've been rewinding this video for about an hour laughing my ass off
5567157 Good, that means the conditioning is working!
Also, Sonata's eating tacos off the carpet? How many lesbian jokes can I make from this?
69! That's how many!
"Secret Fun Time"
This is... Well, going in my Favorites library. I am currently wondering if I need some sort of pocket defibrillator in case I have a laughter-induced heart attack from re-reading this.
Besides this the only other problem I found is the definite lack of "show, don't tell." There are quite a few places where exposition would have been better than dialogue. This is the same problem as The Dazzlings Are Insane, of course, as this seems to be the precursor to that.
HAHAHHAHHAH! SO FUNNY!
People reading this be like:
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Exactly. He just made them here so unlikeable and their relationship - so unhealthy.... ugh.
10,000 years later....
The sirens stared at the devastation before them. The robot uprising had destroyed all traces of mankind, leaving nothing but smog and rubble. Aria turned her eyes from the spectacle to face Adagio. "Hey, remember that time you fell on your face? That was pretty funny."
This is easily the best thing ever written.
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Agreed.
I don't know Aria. In the film you was the one that looked like narcissist. The other girls were wearing spikes and i don't think that's the thing narcissists put on themselves.
If they treated each other like this then they wouldn't be able to stay with each other even a year and they were in human world more than one thousand years. It was pretty weak depiction of sirens.
Great fic!
7288810 Speaking as a spiked narcissist, I can debunk this claim.
Fantastically funny!
I hadn't really thought about it before, but perhaps the secret to writing comedy fics is pacing - this is almost all dialogue, and it keeps the jokes coming thick and fast. Great job!