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Game jump!

While the 6 game jump to prove their elements they are faced with a series of problems, each increasing as one by one take the test! Can they all break the coding?

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Firestreak2018

Firestreak2018 #1 · Jan 3rd, 2015 · 1 · ·

Doesn't the story feel abit... Quick???
Like... I don't know... Just like you're telling, not showing. Feels abit expressionless, but hey, what do I know?

Oh yeah: a few grammar/punctuation errors. Might wanna review it

Hairy Konquerer

Hairy Konquerer #2 · Jan 3rd, 2015 · · ·

Ohhhh crap baskets

Rainbow___Dash

Rainbow___Dash #3 · Jan 3rd, 2015 · · 1 ·

5457853 my grammar might be different to yours. Just saying. And there is reason the first one was quick as it describes how the characters felt like but the other chapters are going to be more in depth

Starlight Nova