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This story is a sequel to When Maud Met Boulder
Pinkie Pie is asked to babysit Boulder by her big sister Maud while she and their father go out of town for the day.
All goes well until Pinkie loses her sister's pet rock when playing with him in the front yard.
And so begins the origin of the game "Camouflage."
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Oh, it was so cute! I had lot of fun, when I read it. Sorry for my English :) I'm not good at it, because it isn't my language, by the way.
But... fiction is so pretty!
5447820 I'm happy you enjoyed and I think your English is great
5447830 Can I translate your story? I'll send you link, when I'm done.
5448147 Sure you can translate it if you want.
Also if you want to do the prequel, that's cool too
5448156 Thanks! Thanks! Thanks! Now I happy :3
lol. I love this. There is just something about Maud getting the game idea from Pinkie that makes sense.
5450386 Yeah, a commentator pitched the idea on my other Maud Pie story and thought it would be great for a sequel... Of course, I asked permission first
The cuteness continues! Maud is such a wonderful big sister to Pinkie, really sweet
5451925 Well, Maud IS the Best Pie EVER!!!
5451983
(We should have a Maud Emoticon now)
5451989 I'M SAYING!!!!!!
I wanna play some Camouflage right now!
This sounds like a Tarot Card. The "of" is superfluous.
Missing comma.
"Who." And here is why:
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Like a foot rub? Or a hand rub?- Wait, hand rub sounds dirty. Or a back rub? Does a rock have hooves?
This is superfluous.
That was adorable. Pinkie Pie was so sweet. And then there is Maud. That uncompromising, enterprising, anything but tranquilizing- Right on Maud.
~KBO.
Zero Dislikes. You earned it, this story is heartwarming.
5587611 thanks
Aww, both this and the first story are adorable! Wonderful job!
5647267 thanks
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You're welcome, and thank you for the follow!
This is a very nice story that could easily be canon. Well done!
5680875 awh!! Thanks
Maud and Pinkie are great sisters and I really enjoy reading stories about both of them. This story was cute and I enjoyed how Pinkie managed to flip the situation in her usual zany way. It was also fun to see her interactions with Boulder; probably why she's so good with Gummy, heh.
Awesome! I love it!
The ground is gravelly, not gravely. The ground has gravel in it, it’s not serious and stern. Cute fic!