Sugarcoat from Crystal Prep.

Rarity or Rainbow. Rarity because the last paragraph seems to imply Trixie got over herself, Rainbow because wishful thinking and Twidash is OTP.

Rarity.

Nobody wants to be the guy? Nobody at all? Fine, I guess I'll take the heat and be the guy for this one.

It's too damn much. Another member? Really? Three partners isn't enough? Look, I get the whole reason why Sunset is doing this in the first place is because she's used to having herds than single relationships, that I guess I can understand. However topics such as those must be taken lightly and thoughtfully, giving time to each member so they can develop more. Here, they seem more like sex toys for Sunset. It doesn't feel romantic at all, I know you could argue a fic titled "Sunset's Herd" will be mostly made up of orgies than actual romance, but it's still something that evens out the constant sex. I feel there's no emotion anymore, and Sunset is only using these three girls for her own devious needs.

Do I have a problem with that? Yes, will I bitch and complain about it after this? No, I wont, this was just something I felt like I needed to share.

6629144 Yours is a perfectly understandable criticism. And since you took the time to write down your concerns, I will be honest with you: I didn't plan this fic to be realistic at all. Heck, I could even get Sunset to bang the whole gang next episode. The thing is that this fic has the purpose to help me write something when I have blockage with my other stories.

In fact, the fic's events are going to become more and more senseless.

Also, if you're still interested in reading this silly fic, here's a little advance of next chapter: The title is "Fun at the Mall". That give away pretty much what's gonna happen, right? So, anyway, what I'm trying to say is Thank you for reading, and Sorry, because the fic won't get any more realistic.

6629645 At least you replied respectfully and in a civil manner. I'll give you props for that. And I have no problem with how unrealistic it'll get, it's inevitable really, all I request is more emotion. Instead of constant fucking, let's take a break and establish a strong relationship between each hers member. That's what I'd do, if I were you.