• Member Since 31st May, 2014
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Voltsthevoltvolts


Cannot physically write word that make logic... But ohmaigod do I try. Currently has no Computer! Hooray for a ten year old laptop!

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Shanomi is a summoner who is always looking for ways to develop her skills. After deciding to summon a small demon, Shanomi is shocked to see different demon altogether.

Has sex tag because of reference, but no sex happens. Just a mild reference to a hornjob.

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 8 )

Congratulations! You have made a necromancer, arachnophile and a succubus all seem adorable.

Actually pretty good. I wouldn't mind a sequel to this maybe.

Also, I think you got hit by a downvote faerie attack.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

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Thanks for the feedback, I might go on with this.

Also it would seem that I have achieve equilibrium with the voting system.

And I do have a habit of making things seem adorable...

Neat story, feels really fresh, but in my opinion this deserves a teen rating. Yes, it might push that rating a bit far, but it's that or marking this mature with the least criteria possible.
Also, this can't be it. I wanna see more, you can't just give us this interesting succubus and a nigh-asexual, isolated unicorn and have them go to Canterlot and just leave it there.

Point is, I'd like more. Four outta five :twilightsmile:

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I had the mature rating just 'in case.' Also, it does seem like I will be going on with this story, which I am looking forward to writing. And as always, thanks for the feedback.

5377306 Mature is only really needed for when there is actual depictions of sex or excessive amounts of gore. Think Saw movies or pornos.

Teen is for things that aren't on that same level, but still have sexual themes or some gore.

Also, setting it to mature like you did without an actual reason cuts into how many people will be able to even find this fic.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

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I was aware of what the mature rating was, just not what full qualified as mature. I have changed the rating to suit seeing as there is no reason for it to be. It was just one of those times where I was in a 'better safe then sorry' mood.

5378626 I see. Well, from now on, you know what is and isn't Mature rating worthy.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

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