Well This Stinks

A pegasus living in Manehattan wakes up one day and decides to make himself a hot drink before setting out on weather duties. Much to his surprise, the cupboard where the cups are kept smells awful and he wants to know why.

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Lord Of Dorkness

Lord Of Dorkness #1 · May 29th, 2015 · · ·

Kinda boring to be honest, even for slice-of-life...

Based on a true story aside, spicing up the reactions from the ponies or the descriptions of the stench would have done wonders.

Still giving you an up-vote for finally making me get this one joke in the Brows Held High review of Perfume: The Story of a Murderer I had no idea where it was from, though. I would have never even guessed it to be a Sponge Bob reference.

Voltsthevoltvolts

Voltsthevoltvolts #2 · May 29th, 2015 · · ·

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Interesting point on the description of the stench. Luckily the cupboard still smells so I can go see if I can put words to it. Also originally I did have Emerald reacting a lot worse but I removed it in the end because I felt it was too much.

ZombieMan