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ManoLabotius


Hey. Just your average brony from 'Murica. I live in a middle-of-nowhere backwoods town. I'm 15 so don't get mad at my awful writing.

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Josh Golden, a teenage gamer, was playing Destiny when he bought something from a merchant in the game. Moments later, the game screen flashes and he finds himself in the body of his avatar, on Equis.

A Displaced Fic

Chapters (2)
Comments ( 26 )

>Bought from a merchant in the game.

Had my attention from that point.

That's right. This avatar is female.

lol no surprises there.

Was this just made?

*story

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The story?
Yes.
The Displaced?
No.

damn good story when is the next chapter

"The inhabitants call it Equis

Why would they name it after one species

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Ponies are the predominant species.
That and the only non-equinish species are the minotaur.

I'm usually not a fan of crossovers like this, but I'm liking the story so far.

Very enjoyable, I just wish it was a little slower. I look forward to the next chapter.

Nicely done. Can't wait to read more

Marecury, that pony name though lol

Odd, I swear I've seen Hypnotics gamertag somewhere before

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He's on Xbox but he's getting a PS3.

*cough* PlayStation Rules *cough*

5366416 yep, I've seen him before.

I don't really care about which consoles people say are better, I'm just more comfortable with xbox

WHY IS IT THAT EVERY SINGLE NEW/INTERESTING STORY THAT I READ SEEMS TO FUCK UP THE LINE BETWEEN FEEL AND FELL?! :twilightangry2:

Now that I'm better, it seems people always mess up feel and fell, and say one thing when they mean the other. It's quite annoying actually. Just ignore me, and I will fade into the back of your mind, like the figment of your imagination that I am. :twilightsmile:

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What about Gryphons, Diamond Dogs, Dragons, and Sirens?

I have to agree with Dundredo. It is a little too fast and not enough feeling in my opinion.

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...
You know what I mean.
Certifiably intelligent.
Spike was raised by Twilight, so he's an exception.

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Gryphons have (considering the hints dropped in the show) thier own kingdom.

Diamond Dogs can make armour, weapons, carts, tools, and plans... Admittedly half baked plans, but plans none the less.

Dragons, besides Spike, have been shown to be intelligent multiple times in the show. Their just extremely greedy assholes...

Sirens... I'm just gonna pass on this and just say: Go watch "Rainbow Rocks"...

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*points at the AU tag*
See?
SEE?

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I still stand by my opinion. Just because you place the AU tag on your story doesn't you can change it that drastically without warning people in the description. I'm all for AU stories, but I appreciate when they tell me a race I like (Dragons) are gonna just be giant lizards that talk. At least then I know why they're writing them like they do.

All I'm saying is that a warning should be added. I'm not telling you to change your entire story for me, just make it so people will know what's going on.

5511921 except for spike........................

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