• Member Since 26th Jul, 2011
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Artaelian


Hi, I'm new to this, and figured I'd write fanfictions so hopefully someone will enjoy what I come up with.

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A thousand years ago, Princess Celestia and Princess Luna fought for power. Both were banished by their mother to locations unknown.
Equestria has been peaceful for the last thousand years under the rule of Princess Maakera. With her faithful Captain, Time Twister, she sees to it that this remains so.
And in Ponyville, a certain yellow filly with a red bow in her mane watches as a new blue star appears in the sky, little does she know that this star marks the adventure of a lifetime, which will lead to a world where the moon shines on a frozen land...

Chapters (11)
Comments ( 8 )

Myself and my editor have been pretty busy with life the last few months . . .

Completely understand.

Hopefully the story appeals to people as it goes on, as this is my first serious go at an alternate universe fic.

This looks really good to us so far. We like the banishing both sisters twist to this story. We are also looking forward to seeing more of Time Twister and Princess Maakera .

You have our permission to continue.

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Indeed it is, my editor and I have been slammed since the last update by work or other things going on. This trend in both our lives also shows no sign of letting up any time soon either, so a properly edited chapter two would have still been a long time off.
I'm hoping things slow enough with my job (or at least not have to be called in to work in the evenings every day after working every day too), to even finish an unedited draft of all planned chapters, as it is, the uploaded chapters is only three behind where I'm currently writing the story.

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More will be coming, I've been struggling to contact my editor but its pretty clear he has become far too busy to ever help edit in the near future (and possibly ever again).
New chapter will be coming just as soon as my boss stops piling tons of work on me that takes up every single hour of every single day... yeah my boss doesn't believe in "time off".

I haven't read the story yet, but Princess Maakera is Celestia and Luna's mother, right? Shouldn't she be a queen?

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The original draft she was indeed referred to as Queen Maakera (and bonus points if you can guess the language and translation of her name without google, though it may be impossible). At the time my editor was helping and he suggested to change it to Princess to be more in line with the show as much as possible.

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