Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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Another note, please keep the comments coming. I take all criticism and comments as helpful. Like I've said before, this story is one big rough draft for an original book I intend to write in the future based on a similar concept. So ironing out problems here is what I want.
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Nah. Stuff got boring after a while. Felt like i was watching a hentai trying to be an anime.
Also the sheer amount a contradictions didn't even have me running in circles, the massive number of them grabbed me by the ass, strapped drills to my bloody feet and told me to walk like a retarded version of brownian motion, creating multiple potholes in the paper everytime I took a randomized step.
No offense, but you need to read over this.
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I intend to at the end. To see what I did right and what I did badly. Thanks